Reviews for Clarity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aiko is probably the perfect character for being evil while also not being evil, it's just magnificent. So serious time skip, it only shocked me slightly but I am kinda curious why she's been with Obito for so long. Why hasn't anyone found her? I figured that there would be a lot of people looking for her... but I'm guessing no one competent enough, and obviously Obito was careful. Aiko just goes with the flow so well... she's the perfect little tool, Obito lucked out with that. I sorta wonder if she will ever get her memory back... it would take a lot I think... seeing someone she was really close to and actually talking to them, like her brother or Kakashi or maybe her dogs. Plus they would have to get close enough and not get killed, since she is obviously without much mercy. I wonder who it was that she killed... I'm trying to work back into my memory if it's one of your characters or someone in the series... or maybe a random new guy that you had to make just for the body. Anyway, great great greatness, looking forward to more of this and more or "All That Glitters". Thanks for responding to my review by the way :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Slap my face and call me Kabuto! Damn...just Damn. This is some seriously messed up Shit Aiko has gotten herself into. How can she still have that memory loss this long after? Crap... Man, now I can't wait for this to properly start. Also, what was that about in the AN? |
![]() ![]() Holy- I almost cried when I saw this. I wonder whats gonna happen now that Aiko will/has left with Obito/Tobi due to memory loss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SCORE! Update! Welcome back and all that. I liked the teaser personally, though i don't suppose that really matters but yeah its great. I am not sure I can pinpoint the Konoha nin Aiko killed, like i don't know who it is off the top of the dome but I will continue to ponder. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So anxious for the ball to start rolling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o so Aiko is now officially tobi's minion? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are not a sub-standard human. You are a perfectly good human, with a soft spot for fish, a love-hate relationship with your sister's cat, and an incredible imagination. I really enjoyed the final version of the prologue, and I'm excited to see where you take Aiko in this sequel. In the meantime...I'll try to go be productive in my own neck of the fanfiction woods. Stupid landlady. And I see the first reviewer already commented on Iruka. I feel partially vindicated in my initial abreaction, lol. : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did she just take out Raido? You are cruel and depressing, please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If we learn anything from this chapter or teaser then it is that Aiko remains in Obito's tender care for at least a year and a half and it seems like he didn't tell her that Konoha might (most definitely is but I am not sure at this point) is looking for her, given her rather relaxed state with that Konoha nin. Speaking of which, who is that nin? The only one with a scar across the bridge of his nose is Iruka but I doubt he would be qualified for this mission? Or at least that he would be better than Aiko which is doubtful really. Ahh all that makes me more excited. Other than that, welcome back (ish)! |