Reviews for Magic Online
Tamha chapter 46 . 7/7
Hopefully Gil will be going on the first trip with him, since James will likely need him the most during the most intense period of mental health counseling. The other three could go whichever trip as necessary by request or schedule needs, though I'd lean towards having Kazuto on the education trip and Mayumi on either the second if he needs the parental support during the possible second step of counseling, or the fourth so he has that support for the last of his medical assessments and rehabilitation.

If he needs to do the second set of three trips, will they pull in Asuna and Rika for two of them to help protect the non-magicals from temporal issues, or will he have to do those three with only Sirius and Remus? Hopefully they won't need to do those trips right away, but I get the feeling they will anyway.
Tamha chapter 37 . 7/7
I've been eagerly waiting for this chapter since Harry woke up. I'm so happy that they're together once again!
ZeroQi chapter 21 . 6/30
I like how they let Dawlish get away with blaming everything on Harry after they all watched him, according to you, literally drag him and push him in front of the boggart.

Your stupidity continues to increase.
ZeroQi chapter 20 . 6/30
Not manipulative? He is. You're just an idiot.

You wrote it out yourself that he was going to hold Harry back a year for failing grades when Harry has the highest grades in his year. Now he's locked him in the castle, even though his guardian is there.

It must be hard living life being that stupid.
ZeroQi chapter 17 . 6/30
He would have won the bet through trickery? You're an idiot. How would he have done that? Hmm? All those memories still exist. You know, the ones the whole bet was over?

Moron.
ZeroQi chapter 7 . 6/30
I like the part where you told us FOUR TIMES IN A ROW IN THE SAME PARAGRAPH that his magic was taking far longer to refill because his soul and magic were cut off from the Earth. Which means that his soul took far longer to regenerate the magic. (Because his soul was blocked by the blood ward, meaning it took a while because it had to do it itself)
SapphireJadeEmerald chapter 1 . 6/7
at first i was very sceptical about the couple pairing and how the story was going when Hogwarts came around. since the beginning was very good and drew me in i had to continue reading. now i can see James being with Hermione. this is a very good story
Fallow54 chapter 46 . 6/5
xxx Kudos xxx : )
ilya39 chapter 42 . 6/3
You know, i'm actually pretty surprised i haven't stumbled upon you and your works until barely a week before. And i've pretty much read hundreds of stories in HP fandom page... Oh well. Knew that getting into crossovers was a good idea. Stubborn shadow first, now this - i'm really amazed with the overall quality of your writing, and the amount of time you take to explain things... most of the time. The rest would be said... in further reviews! :D
(get it? anyone? no? okay...)
Anyway, take care, your works are amazing, keep it up :)
Tal House chapter 46 . 5/31
Loved this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Ptitkactus chapter 12 . 5/30
Why can harry use his trap skill while he no longer have the skil?!
Ptitkactus chapter 10 . 5/30
...Fuck! NO spell, NO skill :( What was the point of the first 9 chapters if you reset all of his hard work when he leave SAO...
Ptitkactus chapter 5 . 5/30
I know that he is young and need time to adapt to his new situation , but i really hope that you won't leave him weak for the rest of the story :( Keep up the good work !
goukagin chapter 46 . 5/28
i love this story and can't wait for more!
Scarlet Dewdrops chapter 46 . 5/28
It's not often that I browse through Crossover categories that have less than 100 fics, but I happened to be bored and stumbled over this gem. I'm having tons of fun reading!

Thanks for writing, and have an awesome day :)
~SD
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