Loved the story.

I am officially caught up now, and can honestly say that this has been a refreshing change of pace for me. It has been a wonderful, if incomplete, journey to spend with you, and Harry too, and I am quite ready to watch for new chapters, even if I don't review on those. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature, this journey of Harry's, with the world. :)

I, for one, am happy that Harry will not be delusional. :)

Also, Harry is oblivious, when looking at the bars I thought 'they're checking each other out! D' and a wondering:

Is Barty Crouch Jr considered an Orange Player, or a Red player?
Well, I guess we'll find out in the next chapter. :)

Just figured I should say it: 'Knarled' doesn't exist in english. 'Gnarled', on the other hand, means twisted. So, just a single letter is all I found bad about this chapter, easily rectified. (Sorry if I'm bugging you, but I am still highly enjoying the chapter/story, especially with the happy turn here :])

PoA? I thought it was Defense Against the Dark Arts, aka DADA?

I have an example of the 'least'/'lest' thing, along another typo:

"[...]revealing his ability to Teleport; something that he really didn't want the NPC adults of this world to know he could do, {Least they found} some way of blocking said ability."

"Least" should be "Lest" and "Found" should be "Find".

As I mentioned earlier, I'm very much enjoying the chapter. The depression, not as much, but that's more my fault, and because you're writing it so well, which means it's technically a compliment. :p

a few details I feel I should mention, mostly spelling.

KoB is the Knights of the Blood*oath*, not Knights of the Blood. Just thought I should let you know so that you could correct the Gameover chapter.

Secondly, "least" is 'smallest', "lest" is what you were going for in those bits such as "Do not do this, 'least' you gain consequences" in a few places the last few chapters.

Also, I'm not sure if "Slue" is a word; it should be a 'w', not an 'e'. "Slew"

Other than that, I'm enjoying this story incredibly! It's still a bit dark for my usual tastes, due to the depression, but I am highly enjoying this, and I'm glad I started reading it. :)

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Everyone knows you do not make promises to children you have no control over keeping. Gil has NO WAY to know that going back online won’t have consequences.

Can’t even allow him a nice epilogue. Just have to keep twisting the torture knife into your characters don’t you? Sick bastard.

About fucking time!

Enough of the stupid drama already.

I’m skimming all this because you have made the hogwarts years annoying to read. I will continue skimming these useless parts until something important to the story happens. None of this serves any purpose to an sao crossover because you have stretched it way too fucking long. This is all rehash of cannon bullshit. You really need to stay on track and stick to the plot. You have seemed to have lost the plot on a side tangent that is completely in-fucking-necessary. Get back to the plot as you have wasted 20 chapters redoing cannon bullshit. The potter verse sucks because of nobody doing anything to solve any of the actual problems that exist except children and here you are redoing the same stupid shit Rowling does. Those characters and yours should be killed off as they are too stupid love.

Your insistance in having shit happen just like cannon makes both the characters and the author seem like gigantic fucking morons. Why did he go back into the lake when he knew this time that people would be fine? You drag shit out forever then have the exciting bits be stupid because you havnt changed things that would have been changed due to a different past in the potter verse.

McGonagal seems a poser as she is not actually doing anything for Harry’s position. He’s still a prisoner, he’s still given unfair treatment and nothing but words are spoken making her efforts seem token at best and typically useless at actually helping. Just as bad as the crap Rowling tried. At this point harry is beginning to deserve the bad shit purely due to karma and his being a little bitch who does nothing to help himself.