Reviews for Magic Online
SomeoneWithTasteDoA chapter 7 . 6/30/2018
I like the part where you told us FOUR TIMES IN A ROW IN THE SAME PARAGRAPH that his magic was taking far longer to refill because his soul and magic were cut off from the Earth. Which means that his soul took far longer to regenerate the magic. (Because his soul was blocked by the blood ward, meaning it took a while because it had to do it itself)
SapphireJadeEmerald chapter 1 . 6/7/2018
at first i was very sceptical about the couple pairing and how the story was going when Hogwarts came around. since the beginning was very good and drew me in i had to continue reading. now i can see James being with Hermione. this is a very good story
Fallow54 chapter 46 . 6/5/2018
xxx Kudos xxx : )
ilya39 chapter 42 . 6/3/2018
You know, i'm actually pretty surprised i haven't stumbled upon you and your works until barely a week before. And i've pretty much read hundreds of stories in HP fandom page... Oh well. Knew that getting into crossovers was a good idea. Stubborn shadow first, now this - i'm really amazed with the overall quality of your writing, and the amount of time you take to explain things... most of the time. The rest would be said... in further reviews! :D
(get it? anyone? no? okay...)
Anyway, take care, your works are amazing, keep it up :)
TheLargestHoodie chapter 46 . 5/31/2018
Loved this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Ptitkactus chapter 12 . 5/30/2018
Why can harry use his trap skill while he no longer have the skil?!
Ptitkactus chapter 10 . 5/30/2018
...Fuck! NO spell, NO skill :( What was the point of the first 9 chapters if you reset all of his hard work when he leave SAO...
Ptitkactus chapter 5 . 5/30/2018
I know that he is young and need time to adapt to his new situation , but i really hope that you won't leave him weak for the rest of the story :( Keep up the good work !
goukagin chapter 46 . 5/28/2018
i love this story and can't wait for more!
Scarlet Dewdrops chapter 46 . 5/28/2018
It's not often that I browse through Crossover categories that have less than 100 fics, but I happened to be bored and stumbled over this gem. I'm having tons of fun reading!

Thanks for writing, and have an awesome day :)
~SD
Guest chapter 46 . 5/22/2018
I don't really understand why kikuoka is there. Like why is he envoy end at all. Harry answered some questions which he didn't need to do. And got a medical evaluation. You'd think it all would be left to magicals. Why is he so envolved. I hope he doesn't try to get Harry's magical game somehow. I hope its explained why later. So will James look like a healthy 15 year old when he does to hogwarts. Will he finally be taller than hermione lol
Guest chapter 46 . 5/22/2018
Love the story. Please update soon
Guest chapter 46 . 5/17/2018
Nooooooo this cant be abandoned. Right!? Right?!

Sniffles. This story is awesome
Guest chapter 25 . 5/17/2018
Hermione is a moron for being so smart. How did she expect to hear back from them when she is incommunicado and didn’t inform her parents?
nikhil.majumdar chapter 46 . 5/12/2018
I can’t wait to read what happens next!
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