Reviews for Magic Online |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is an utterly unique story. Most fanfiction fail to convey emotional depth as is done here; I feel so sorry for Harry because he believes he is in a matrix situation, and this is contrasted with the wizards' sense of failure and Harry's own misguided yet tragic grief. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continúa con el fic por favor quiero |
![]() ![]() ![]() O WELL SOMETHINGS HAPPPENJNG ABD I THINK ILL GET MY ANSWER SOONNN!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Question Does Harry’s cursed scar carry through into his Avatar? Becauseeeee idk maybe cuz its a dark curse it does? My head cannon cuz it hasnt been stated is that it does but no one has mentioned it yet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for posting this, its been a while sense you've wrote anything on here are you ok? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! Three years to finally start questioning stuff?! I just can’t see Hermione letting these cryptic remarks go unanswered for so long |
![]() ![]() ![]() bruh wtf this is false advertising you said its completed ;( great work tho i liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story only part i dislike is the way you go about introducing his soul into the game wouldnt that cause a problem when the game ends like how does he get out wouldnt that mean he dies if it ends or is magic gonna magically save him or is kirito gonna pull a hacker man and make him an item. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story, Author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor fluffy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruh this is to much angst and depression this early on chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() So what will happen to him ounce the game is finished? Is he going to be an NPC with consciousness and imortality inside the game or does his soul returns to his body plus all of the bodily change that happens inside the game will happened to his outside body? Also what will happen when Hogwarts letter arrived? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhhh so how does Harry's body will be preserved? I mean it still needs to eat or else it will die before harry dies |
![]() ![]() ![]() make Hermione and other play in the new SAO. I know it will make lot of difference when fully get to experience the world where Harry had spend 2 years and it may help change to use magic with same perspective. Hermione will love flying and dancing with Harry in Alfheim. |