Reviews for Magic Online |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the fic can you continue |
![]() ![]() You made Harry’s hp incalculable so you don’t have to calculate it, didn’t you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() not worth reading save yourself the effort. if the author didn't find it worth coming back to neither should you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry getting the scars from the last battle in Aincrad? Interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's ironic that Harry ended up killing a huge snake creature single-handely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, please, please don't kill off Agil... |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a marvelous piece of work I just discovered! I am so so glad I got the chance to read this! What a most love about your story is how detailed oriented it is. Everything happens for a reason and is well planned in advance. the amount of fanfictions I have read that don't have proper planning is enormous! So I truly appreciate your work. Also, you have a way with words that just simple rubs me the right way. With the amount of explaining that it goes on your story I could have gotten bored but I never did at all, it was very interesting and well-written. I feel like I learned a lot from your work so I appreciate it. I can't wait to see what's next on the story! I hope you get to return soon to continue. I originally started reading it because it was HarryxHermione and had SAO which I love so in my mind was a win win. I was a bit worry at first because I felt like the I was never going to get to the before I run out of chapters to read. And to be honest, it kinda happen, but at least I can see it coming soon. Anyway this review is already too long and you probably won't even see it, but I just felt like I needed to tell you how much I loved this! Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece! |
![]() ![]() ![]() j'aimerais savoir, même s'il a volé le jeu à son cousin, son cousin a le même âge que lui... donc la logique sur la limite d'âge est invalide.. " |
![]() ![]() ![]() je me posais la question, mais est-ce qu'il grandisse dans le jeu ou pas ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() génial cette histoire ! x) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to see more, it has been 4-ish years. I can’t imagine the dust that be on this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll add it as a favorite for originality if nothing else. I do, however, think the time travel stuff is perhaps weak, and you may want to consider these last couple chapters. For one thing Harry's own personal time would still be advancing. As others have said, it would make more sense for the researchers to go back in time, or perhaps better yet, just to fix Harry's problems with a dangerous magical ritual and move on... Again, overall a favorite. I'm just not sure the time travel bit helps. |
![]() ![]() So four years before an update. Hope you are doing well can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Four years. I have found this four years after its last update, and I'm happy I have. This is a great story that has a well thought out premise and ties in with good understanding of the source material. I feel for this Harry, he has been through a hall hard to classify as he is only now going to get the help he needs by getting away from backwards British magicians! I feel that eventually harry and his crew would have moved to Japan permanently by the end of the story. I hope that you are well and that eventually you can come back to finish these wonderful stories. Thank you for sharing them with us! |