Reviews for Magic Online
Guest chapter 46 . 12/29/2021
You to countinue
Surthum chapter 13 . 12/14/2021
Read till chapter 13. Conclusion? This story is angst porn. If you like that, great. Not my cup of tea, though.
Aratherfluffyfatcat chapter 46 . 12/8/2021
Enjoying the story thanks
Acheron Skolfruund chapter 46 . 11/24/2021
Update soon please.
Duaimei chapter 46 . 11/14/2021
Thank you!
Guest chapter 46 . 11/11/2021
You to countinue
marcol.plata007 chapter 2 . 10/22/2021
Please continue Writing You're story
Thank you
xXWynterWolfXx chapter 20 . 10/21/2021
As an aside to my last review, wouldn't the memory manipulation be a sign that he wasn't in a game? The nerve gear(which he still believes he's connected to) doesn't have the capabilities for that. Wouldn't he draw the connection if he's supposed to be smarter than his canon self?
xXWynterWolfXx chapter 20 . 10/21/2021
Okay...I've been reading off and on for a few days so i feel comfortable leaving a review right around this point.

I love the concept of this story.

I find the execution lacking.

Not in storytelling per say, but in content. Mild spoilers for those reading so be warned.

All I see in this version of Harry is a dickheaded kid who is more of a menace to society than some child. You probably meant to write him as having realistic flaws and I commend you for that. His insistence on his current reality is beyond unreasonable and the fact that his interactions with a muggleborn who he's told his situation to HASN'T lead to conversation about the current worlds technology or him asking(since he's so suspicious) how he was found and not mentioning A STRANGE MUGGLE MACHINE THAT KEPT HIM ALIVE FOR 2 YEARS didn't happen.

I can't emphasize or sympathize with this Harry at this point because, in actuality, a lot of his suffering he brought on himself. Now this still makes sense because he's an emotionally unstable child with superpowers and a lack of understanding of the world. But dude, Modern day London and he still thinks he's trapped? After hearing about things that should have been a dead giveaway? I can't say I like him at all. Maybe there is some redemption for him later on so I'll continue. That is my only gripe with this story though so it makes it difficult.

Otherwise good job.
Guest chapter 46 . 10/14/2021
You to countinue
Guest chapter 46 . 10/9/2021
The way you took away his immortality is bullshit complete and utter bullshit
foxiler chapter 25 . 10/2/2021
I find it strange that Gil not just send his email adresse to communicate faster (and cheaper). I understand why the author did not did it. It would be strange for example that hermione need 2 or 3 days to respond to a mail when Gin respond in a mater of minutes or hours since it would need to be forward by her parents to Hogwarts. It can also be because Gil didn't think of it : since he received a mail, he respond with a mail without considering an email adresse.(Or it's just a plot hole \_(ツ)_/)
foxiler chapter 13 . 10/1/2021
I'm a little sad Norbert didn't eat Quirrell when he was hunting the unicorn, it would have been fun.
mark.press.9 chapter 46 . 9/22/2021
would realy love to see this story continue IF you are able to?
mark.press.9 chapter 21 . 9/21/2021
right so why doesnt anyone take him to the dursleys and show him this is the real world (iknow it wouldnt be that easy but you get the idea) and why doesnt anyone else know about the ten thousand people or however many survived being trapped in a computer simulation for 2 years id think that sort of news would be self evident with all the other bodies wasting away until hospitalised as other people didnt go into magical stasis, all that aside great story so far hope you come back to it someday or at least let it go for adoption, as for harry hes a bit emo but understandably so but i hope he comes to know hes in the real world soon. thanks for sharing a great story with us.
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