Reviews for Eighth, the Dragoon
KenpoDragonRoar chapter 6 . 10/6
I’ve reread this a couple of times now and only just now saw the crack at destiny with “the Travelers Gift”. So… what? Is Issei’s house in the ascendant realm is he a voidwalker or perhaps a stormcaller, maybe even a sunsinger or even a dawnblade don’t tell me he’s a titan he’s too smart to be a titan
Xearthes chapter 5 . 9/30
Fucking hell man, why didn't I read this fic sooner. Why did I read it at all. I want to have never read this chapter. I want to keep reading it forever. No other DxD fic managed to get me to bawl like a fucking weak-ass baby. Congratu-fucking-lations. With much hate - your faithful reader.
Kenshin135 chapter 10 . 9/12
So, the threat is probably Trihexa, assuming you stay in DxD terms and not your own story stuff. That's a pretty reasonably threat to have, considering what Trihexa did in canon...

I'm a little curious why you made Great Red superior to Ophis though. Canonically, they're basically exact equals; Ophis has the literal power of infinity. She can't fight him to kick him out of the rift because of that. Mutually assured destruction, along with possible erasure of the world itself. Also the reason neither of them could even try to stop Trihexa, their other near exact equal. (*maybe* a little superior, big maybe though). It took the greatest dragon slaying method available to mess with her, and that same exact method would have likely worked on Great Red too.

Also curious on how you'd rate the Shiva, Vishnu, and Brahma against the predators. Shiva, at the very least, should be above them, considering he was confident he could put up a decent fight against Trihexa. Maybe not so confident he could win, but still, to be able to do anything at all to that monster is impressive.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 15 . 8/22
Was that last part an Omake ?

Anyway, I hope Issei Wake up and get his head out of his ass soon.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 14 . 8/22
Issei was played like a fool. I really don't like what Issei is becoming.
Man oh man...
OoOXylionOoO chapter 12 . 8/22
Well written *not lemon*.
I wondered if Issei is really using is full power of Predator.
I mean the other seems so good at listening to the Ruler.
Issei should know a lot more than he is. He seems suprised by a lot of things that the Ruler should tell him.
It's like... Issei doesn't know the extent of his abilities.
It is a shame.

Anyway, trhis chapter was brilliant as always, keep up the great work.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 11 . 8/22
Chapter 5:

Brilliant chapter.
Do I agree with everything that happened? No
Do I agree with Free/Fourth that Issei wasn't a Predator and only a child looking without seeing? Yes
Did it make me sad? Absolutly.
There is a very fine line between love and hate. I can't seems to choose which one I feel for this chapter.

Anyway, keep up the fantastic work.


It was a very good chapter. Not as disconcerting and heartbreaking than the last.
But I enjoyed reading it a lot nonetheless.
Please keep up the brilliant work and thanks for sharing you work with us.

Chapter 10:

Bittersweet chapter. I wished Issei would be a little more reasoned.
With his powers of a predator, if he took a little moment to really think, ponder, question things he would have so many realisations...
It is like watching the best antenna in the world failing to sense anything because it is configurated on the wrong channel.
So much potential wasted...

As for this chapter...
Seeing Issei cry like a girl is becoming old very fast.
But that Omake at the end was really good :D
RH-Excalibur chapter 6 . 8/13
dvilleza chapter 12 . 7/11
everything is forgiven. it's too late at night to hold a grudge
dvilleza chapter 10 . 7/11
and I say that in a nice way while still insulting you
dvilleza chapter 11 . 7/11
and I say that in a nice way while still insulting you
dvilleza chapter 10 . 7/11
you filthy cunt, I change my mind
dvilleza chapter 9 . 7/10
ahaha some is forgiven, you filthy sister killer
dvilleza chapter 8 . 7/10
having not gotten to the actual story, I will be very upset if you turn the Eighth Predator into a weak little shit against Raiser.
dvilleza chapter 6 . 7/10
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