Reviews for Return of the Dead King
GenericPjoName chapter 1 . 8/31/2020
Flames and shadows are not tangible objects. Shadows are an area of lesser light, or decreased amount of photons while fire is mainly oxygen, carbon monoxide, vaporized fuel, and ash.
TheMeister7 chapter 1 . 7/28/2020
I hated everything after the Lethe scene. You should have stopped right before that and just given it to another author or change it. I was loving it and then you ruined it
Guest chapter 12 . 7/19/2020
This story was amazing until chapter 12. I severely disliked him falling into the lethe. In my oppinion that kinda ruined the story
chriskidd2001 chapter 7 . 7/10/2020
Amazing Loved it
chriskidd2001 chapter 4 . 7/10/2020
Amazing kick Zeus Ass Percy
chriskidd2001 chapter 3 . 7/10/2020
Sure that was awesome
Guest chapter 3 . 6/23/2020
So that's how Hitler died
typersnyder chapter 19 . 6/16/2020
Yeah good I hated this book after the river incident.
Tracey chapter 4 . 6/6/2020
This story was written by a 9 year old who only draw rainbow and sunshine. This story is a joke. Who honestly roots for Perseus? He has zero backbone. Just can’t
Guest chapter 18 . 4/28/2020
Guest chapter 6 . 4/26/2020
If the gods are so against dictatorship why did they overthroned Perseus who was describe as a kind ruler to put in place someone like Zeus who isn't ? Makes no sense
ashcarr101 chapter 19 . 3/28/2020
Please have Zoe be Percy's lover in Rise of the King. Awesome story, I'll now go to Rise of the King. See ya:)
Sein Hall chapter 2 . 3/20/2020
Ehem... It's not, 'Lady Fates,' for that would mean it was one woman with the name, or title of 'Fates.' No, it should be, 'Ladies Fate.'
Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
Yes he can, Chaos can technically defeat all of them as he used a minority of his powers to create them. Even so, if they just wake up from slumber they will be too weak to fight Chaos, even it is four of the strongest.
JAYNW chapter 3 . 9/30/2019
... Why were they all children of Hades?
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