Reviews for warrirs dirkness risiing: :dewikikts story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok then |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmmm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Riverclan cats can swim...It's their only unique trait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Tiggerstar" not this again... |
![]() ![]() ![]() uhh...oh dear...this isn't good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is "it" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again and again and again and again and again and again and again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what "stirkits porpechy" is either. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's one way to begin |
![]() ![]() ![]() perfect... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm afraid I cannot review God Oak because I do not know what God Oak is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was...something I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously, guys? I think you should have some sympathy for this author. He/she's not very fluent in English, and I don't think you should be flaming his/her story like this. If you really want to, you should at least add some encouragement into it. I've known people who committed suicide because of hate mails because his/her dream is ruined and there seems to be no future for them. I've known people back at my school who just hate me because I'm half Korean. I'm proud that I have some Korean culture in me, and I don't see why we should tell them this is the worst story ever. That's no help. To Dewflight, I'm sure your stories would be amazing if you just try a little on your grammar. Otherwise, you might want to get a beta reader. Overall, I think your stories would be wonderful if you fix the conventions! Good luck! And ignore those horrible reviews out there. Just don't think of them, put your mind on something else. Those people are the ones who are the worst. If you wish, just erase those reviews. Good luck, and I know you can do it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is the most retarded story ever but its hilarious as fuck |