Reviews for Royal Ward |
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Guest chapter 67 . 8/27 Well, I was really wondering how this would end when it got down to 2 chapters to go. Especially as long as it took to get rather short items "fleshed out". It did end in a rather abrupt THUD. :-) |
Incantations7 chapter 1 . 8/5 After rereading this story, and even though I believe that it would probably be a very short story, I still want to read a sequel that gives the full fallout from this one, plus the story of what happens during his Hogwarts years without a MoB in charge… |
Latarra chapter 67 . 7/18 Excellent. Well written and worth reading. |
Loresign chapter 66 . 7/8 I left a review before on the last chapter, but wanted to say something more. I wish you could have added a few more chapters to this story. It was a wonderful read. I don’t think I’ve ever read a story that I wished would not have ended. I love the fact that Princess Diana and Sirius got to there. Shame it didn’t happen in real life. An epilogue would also be nice. I am a major Harmony fan and it looks like Harry and Hermione could easily go to together in this. Thank you for a great story. |
Lindie de Waal chapter 16 . 6/26 Well to be honest, I'm one of those that will just burn and bury the ashes of a rubix then build a bbq over it just to make sure the evilness can't escape. |
dhamann7878 chapter 67 . 6/25 I've really enjoyed this work and the way you worked everything together. even though its been more than a few years, any thoughts on a possible sequel? |
Lisa chapter 37 . 5/28 I had an amniocentesis but not the cerclage. The amniocentesis sounds pretty similar to what my husband and I experienced except that they didn’t have our results nearly as quickly as the Malfoy’s results because they sent our daughter’s amniotic fluid off to a lab as opposed to doing the lab work themselves. |
at-nightfall chapter 54 . 5/17 Doesn't the UK use A4 paper? Minerva should not see paper for three ring folders unless in correspondence from the US. With A4 the paper can have four holes, two or none. |
at-nightfall chapter 53 . 5/17 do you consider Hogsmeade a village or a town? You are using the terms as if they are interchangeable. Being German, to me they are different legal states of a settlement. One can have full town rights or none. Historically the UK even had the term market town (North German Flecken, South German Marktdorf), which is inbetween, having only the right to hold a market of the traditional town rights. |
at-nightfall chapter 42 . 5/14 regarding the rats: I would have called them eatee and chewtoy and given them to he cat lady for her cats. But I grew up in the countryside, and my grandpa kept pigs. Thank you for the story. I think I read it before, but I can not remember these chapters. |
kittyranma chapter 67 . 5/5 Oh my God, so funny. |
HoneyBear84 chapter 67 . 5/2 Love it and wish it had a sequel |
Laila2605 chapter 67 . 5/1 I love this story. It is my 4. best story so far, only passed by "Make a wish" - "Harry Crow" - "Agent Potter". Will there ever be a seqeual ? |
BeyondRubies chapter 35 . 4/22 As much as I love this fic, it’s very well documented (and was admitted by Diana and her lovers) that she was having affairs before Charles stepped out. She was just as much at fault for things. I suppose that’s why this is fanfiction. |
candesce chapter 2 . 4/20 Sorry, but I can't understand how a person literally appointed by the Queen to oversee Harry's care would allow these conditions to continue. Frankly it didn't make sense even in Hatal Fart Attack why the Queen didn't immediately remove him from their care upon discovering he'd been locked up in a cupboard. If she didn't or couldn't deal with that situation then it's politically stupid to make him a Royal Ward and therefore stake her own reputation on his treatment. Stephen not reporting back about his lack of food or at the very least immediately moving to deal with that lack is crazy. Can you imagine anyone leaving a child alone for a week in house that doesn't feed them? Doesn't talk to Petunia, doesn't bring by groceries. And then to find out that magicals have been interfering with child protective services to keep the abuse going? As if the Queen would allow that to continue either. I thought this fic was supposed to be about a Harry who got the proper backing of the Crown, not some random muggleborn's poor attempts to help. |