Ok... I just found this story and I have some comments about all seventeen chapters.
The first two or three were a little confusing and disjointed as well as the next two I believe. The remaining chapters all have a flow to them that work for me and I have found them a good read. I look forward to the next few chapters to see how the story moves forward...

A short but interesting chapter, in the last chapthers I wondering about the fate of Rygel... sorry, Dominar Rygel XIV

Good update.

Good update.

26 bulky yellowish ships filled with food and medical supplies, just as a refugee fleet needs them most. Too good to be true.

Good update.

Well, the Colonials are gonna be fine.

Good update.

Very enjoyable tale.

Nice cliff-hanger too.

Great story so far.
Small nitpick, they were abandoned by Lee Adama.

Good one.

Only a thing, the Galactica didn't abandon any ship, the 19 ships were left begin by Roslin.

There should be a correction here on the last line. As I remember the miniseries the non-FTL ships were abandoned by the new Colonial One and the rest of the civilian ships with working FTLs. The Galactica had already made the jump to Ragnar by then.

Gotta say, Crichton is doing pretty well. What luck to have found those ships though shouldn't they have been destroyed the moment they others jumped away?

Should've keep the reason why Three has trouble with her memory override till later. Like when they figure out she's a Cylon and look at her medical records.

I can see how Crichton got into this. Gotta hope the survivors of the Solaria don't get a good look at him or just think he was part of the training run.

Short chapter, but at least we get to see how Chrichton ended up in his position aboard a Battlestar.