Reviews for He's My Son
Xhex25 chapter 29 . 9/16
cute story. im a little sad that you stopped where you did but i understand.

i dont know why you need to include authors notes at the beginning and end of every chapter. i listen through tts and all your notes make it hard to listen to your work.
Spang chapter 2 . 9/13
Prayers Hugs and condolences to Anna Many thanks for contributing to this marvelous potter fanfiction May your heart heal as soon as possible
Spang chapter 7 . 9/10
Fabulous great plot twists ( Hermione may be distressed were she to learn Harry’s more Viktor’s type than is she but would please Ron who in cano wasn’t pleased that famous victor was the one taking Hermione to the Yule ball
Spang chapter 6 . 9/10
Thanks for continuing and sharing your marvelous creation hope real life is treating you better and that all is well with your family glad your sister author got to know her grandmother well enough to deeply mourn her loss: I knew neither of my grandmothers well lived a distance from each loved visiting my paternal grandmother the few times we did ( first time had/ made fresh squeezed orange juice; seeing pictures of my father aunt and uncle as young folks
Spang chapter 3 . 9/10
Extremely well done going down new pathsHarry able to be more than a victimized pawn for Dumbledore to misuse sorry Snape can still not see beyond being tormented by the marauders during his school years so being told that someone who’s the image of his high school tormentor is actually his son is more than he Can bear ( in some stories it’s a glamor that will wear off when he reaches adulthood
Spang chapter 1 . 9/8
Excellent am determined to read through to completion PS guess AU will let triwizard tournament be back at Hogwarts and Harry compete for Durmstrang vs Victor ( but guess if Victor is gay would only be dating Hermione to keep up appearances and appease his parents
Spang chapter 2 . 9/6
Prayers Hugs and condolences to Anna Many thanks for contributing to this marvelous potter fabrication May your heart heal as soon as possible
Spang chapter 4 . 9/6
Love this new chapter in Harry’s life may be loved by an adult who doesn’t view him as a burden , freak or unworthy of care or affection simply brilliant
Spang chapter 2 . 9/6
Excellent work can’t wait to learn How Durmstrang works out seems improbable he could replace Victor as their representative in a triwizard tournament given age issue unless rules are changed In any event tournament shouldn’t take place at Hogwarts unless past installment took place elsewhere in canon, schools alternate so should so another school should play host this time But guess could trash that in AU
Spang chapter 1 . 9/4
Think it should be normally I don’t give out severe punishment instead of naturally minor suggestion for Dumbledore’s statement
Spang chapter 2 . 9/4
Condolences and hugs to Anna hope your grandmother is now resting in peace though of course you will miss her
Spang chapter 2 . 9/2
Fantastic story telling ( Trust triwizard won’t take place at Hogwarts this time so even if underage Harry got to participate again though Krum should represent Durmstrang not ineligible Harry ( and hopefully no repeat shenanigans re his entry designed to expose him to Voldy)
Spang chapter 5 . 9/2
Enjoy your excellent writing and imaginative work sliding canon characters into new slots ( and hopefully giving Snape a lesson in humility and the Gryff overreaction to Harry’s connection with a (former) death eater revealing their character flaws: thanks !
Spang chapter 6 . 9/1
No romance between Harry and Krum please ( many fanfics have Harry be gay even inAU think that’s too big a stretch Ps : your work is marvelous
blindneighbour chapter 7 . 8/31
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