please tell me him and Viktor still get together

so another auther, with writers block. good luck on the rewrite, I will not follew it

Yea Jeverus

I'm enjoying this story so far, but you need to pay some more attention to the details. Harry had his nimbus broken, so Charlotte got him a Firebolt. But when he got the Firebolt, Harry said he didn't need it because he still had his nimbus. Now in this chapter, Harry's friends fixed up a Firebolt for him, and Harry says he already has a broom and that it is a nimbus.

The story overall is very fun to read, but there have been inconsistencies that have pulled me out of the story.

you keep changing the type of broom harry has. his nimbus 2000 broke from the slytherins. when he came to live with char he got a 2002 nimbus. then you changed it to the firebolt when he first played with Victor as a beater. I'm just confused on what broom he has or does he have multiple?

option A Severus is the Bio dad but believe Charlotte is better for him but is involved maybe as a Godfather

I'm sorry to hear of ur troubles . I'm saddened that I was binge reading this amazing story and it ended so abruptly :(

Frankly I had a problem with Charlotte dating Severus after he was so cruel to Harry.

Hey! I like the updates you are thinking of doing for this story. It sounds like a very interesting direction. Will you post a note here when the new version is ready to be read? Thank you for sharing your work. It is quite good, and I enjoyed reading it.

he didn't even hesitate to lock Sirius away without a trial.

Fudge wasn't Minister until 1990. Sirius was thrown in prison in 1981. Bagnold was Minister from 1980 to 1990 so she should be the one blamed.

Please don't put "complete" to your fic when it is abandoned... people cho are only reading complete fics here don't want abandoned stories. You should add "ABANDONED" on the resume

Okay I like the first changes, that's good her taking him as an infant cause Harry deserves a good childhood.

Always love weasely drama

Dumbledore is very meddlesome

I like, I would rescue Siri from that place but entirely up to you

yay

i like the idea of him being there

I think that Charlet and Snape should raise Harry together and Snape should be Harry's bio dad and he should grow up in France with them. If I misspelled the girl character's name sorry. Also I think that Harry would be happier with both of them raising him.

Snape Harry’s bio-dad and later finding out

I really like this story! Look forward to reading the re-write :)