Reviews for Rise of the Revanchist Empire
BrentNewland chapter 12 . 8/29
I wish I had read chapter 13 fully before I reviewed. The chapter is short and confusing, I suddenly have no idea what's going on. All this talk of companies is confusing, Naruto's attitude has changed drastically, and why would you need credits to build a star forge? Use foundries to make more foundries, then use them to make the star forge. Once you've built the first foundry, everything except programming and design work is free.
BrentNewland chapter 13 . 8/29
Love the story. Totally don't understand the first scene in this chapter. Why's he upset that he lost a bunch of shadow clones?
reptoholic chapter 13 . 8/8
This chapter was a bit off, but amazing story so far.
reptoholic chapter 12 . 8/8
AWESOMEEE
reptoholic chapter 10 . 8/8
Enjoyed it
reptoholic chapter 8 . 8/8
LMDAOOOO
reptoholic chapter 7 . 8/8
Keep it up! Hope he makes a crew and gets some girls
reptoholic chapter 6 . 8/8
Awesome... but why no sex?
reptoholic chapter 5 . 8/8
BAHAHAHA YESSSS
reptoholic chapter 4 . 8/8
I REALLY hope naruto can make the chains!
reptoholic chapter 3 . 8/8
Keep it up!
reptoholic chapter 2 . 8/8
Awesome.
reptoholic chapter 1 . 8/7
looking good
StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 5/10
I'm flat out not interested in the retarded "My family hates me but somehow I randomly bump into Mikoto and everything changes" cliche. It couldn't be less interesting.
Kingkong101 chapter 13 . 4/20
Confusing
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