Reviews for Pen Pals
Airboats chapter 16 . 5/2
Yeah, Bella was an idiot. He wasn't thinking of her. He got married and didn't expect her to show up. She acted like she cared he was married but still had sex w him. Supposedly cared that he didn't say anything to Krystal about them being together but watched as he still didn't say anything until they caught his brother and Krystal hooking up. I get it, there's an hea, so it makes everything alright. The story was well written but the plot was a nope. You took a pen pal story (where they were both sweet and innocent) and turned it into a freaking drug and murder scandal...thing... Unnecessary drama... And who the hell is Penny? I still have no idea what the point of her was! Ok! Good stuff!
Ninkita chapter 16 . 2/8
:) that's a very nice end to it.
Ninkita chapter 15 . 2/8
Awwwww! Well, I'm not saying I'm not glad the drama packed up pretty quick, but you did make me curious about the relationship e had with Krystal.
Ninkita chapter 14 . 2/8
Yeah that was not unexpected.. But phew, at last.. And her pee story was funny. And relatable.
Ninkita chapter 13 . 2/8
Oh dear Krystal is... Something else.
Ninkita chapter 12 . 2/8
Phew, he's done got himself into a nice old mess.
Ninkita chapter 11 . 2/8
Oh will he finally speak? Their push and pull is fun reading, though.
Ninkita chapter 10 . 2/8
The scene in the river was just so pretty.
Ninkita chapter 9 . 2/8
Hmm what's the deal?
Ninkita chapter 8 . 2/8
Oooooh but I want to know more!
Ninkita chapter 7 . 2/8
Ah camping and flirting :)
Ninkita chapter 6 . 2/8
Ooh
Ninkita chapter 5 . 2/8
Ooh mysterious stranger? And eeee, she's almost there!
Ninkita chapter 4 . 2/8
It really is great to meet new, different ppl on a journey.
Ninkita chapter 3 . 2/8
Penny makes me smile :)
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