Reviews for Pen Pals
marigold123 chapter 16 . 5/6
I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for writing.
Airboats chapter 16 . 5/2/2017
Yeah, Bella was an idiot. He wasn't thinking of her. He got married and didn't expect her to show up. She acted like she cared he was married but still had sex w him. Supposedly cared that he didn't say anything to Krystal about them being together but watched as he still didn't say anything until they caught his brother and Krystal hooking up. I get it, there's an hea, so it makes everything alright. The story was well written but the plot was a nope. You took a pen pal story (where they were both sweet and innocent) and turned it into a freaking drug and murder scandal...thing... Unnecessary drama... And who the hell is Penny? I still have no idea what the point of her was! Ok! Good stuff!
Ninkita chapter 16 . 2/8/2017
:) that's a very nice end to it.
Ninkita chapter 15 . 2/8/2017
Awwwww! Well, I'm not saying I'm not glad the drama packed up pretty quick, but you did make me curious about the relationship e had with Krystal.
Ninkita chapter 14 . 2/8/2017
Yeah that was not unexpected.. But phew, at last.. And her pee story was funny. And relatable.
Ninkita chapter 13 . 2/8/2017
Oh dear Krystal is... Something else.
Ninkita chapter 12 . 2/8/2017
Phew, he's done got himself into a nice old mess.
Ninkita chapter 11 . 2/8/2017
Oh will he finally speak? Their push and pull is fun reading, though.
Ninkita chapter 10 . 2/8/2017
The scene in the river was just so pretty.
Ninkita chapter 9 . 2/8/2017
Hmm what's the deal?
Ninkita chapter 8 . 2/8/2017
Oooooh but I want to know more!
Ninkita chapter 7 . 2/8/2017
Ah camping and flirting :)
Ninkita chapter 6 . 2/8/2017
Ooh
Ninkita chapter 5 . 2/8/2017
Ooh mysterious stranger? And eeee, she's almost there!
Ninkita chapter 4 . 2/8/2017
It really is great to meet new, different ppl on a journey.
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