Reviews for The Night after Cell's Defeat
BV4ever chapter 26 . 9/14
Amazing story! Emotionally charged! Plausible well written portrayal of each character! You captured the emotionally challenged Saiyan Prince so flawlessly. Really enjoyed the slow progression of change that he went through. There were moments in the story that sent up red flags about emotional and physical abuse that both bulma and trunks had been subjected to. But in all fairness to vegeta he’s NOT human so he requires patience, guidance, and unconditional love! And you wrote this so eloquently with Bulma’s character. Kudos!
Kitty in the Box chapter 26 . 1/17
I absolutely loved this. so wonderful and what a relieving experience. I love Bulma's words here. you captured her so well.
Ana chapter 26 . 6/10/2017
I Loved vegeta! He was just Perfect! Thanks for that Story :)
Tjay Mnil chapter 1 . 5/14/2017
I've only made it chapter three so far and I hope you'll take my corrections into account and do some quick editing.

When a new person speaks it starts a new paragraph. It's hard to follow the dialogue when I am not sure who is talking.
Cb chapter 26 . 1/19/2017
Great story!
Guest chapter 26 . 12/28/2016
Loved it!
Revan3363 chapter 26 . 12/16/2016
Good story, any chance of a sequel?
Rebekka chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
Nicely written you have a lot of talent!, im leaving this on my desktop so I can finish reading at work tomorrow. Do you have any other Burma stories?
pannybaby123 chapter 26 . 10/15/2016
Loveee it! great ending :)
Saiyan L chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
Just found your story and I can already tell that I'll enjoy it after just reading the first chapter! I've been hoping to find a story of Bulma and Vegeta during those 7 years. Anyway, I'm off to Ch. 2!

Ps. I think you captured Vegeta well! He was vulnerable but not OOC!
Jonnie Joke chapter 18 . 7/30/2016
Vegeta letting Trunks win intentionally is the most fatherly thing he can do to his son EVER!
mariahernandezperez26 chapter 26 . 7/7/2016
SO proud of the story it is absolutely one of my favorites read it twice already and I'm still in love with it it's beautiful especially the ending I can't wait to read more from you especially with the new Dragon Ball super I wish you made stories involving Vegeta and Bulma in that storyline thank you.
NinjaWhisper chapter 26 . 7/3/2016
So glad you added this chapter. The feels. . .
Princess Vegetita Saiyan chapter 26 . 6/25/2016
I love it! My favorite part was the bonus chapter, I was in tears :( Thanks for writing ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
i really do think there is more to vegeta then what the anime is showing if he was so evil and stuff he wouldnt have 2 kids with bulma. Just look at to how he was raised by that freak thats all he knew till he got to earth if you look at it by the time gt rolled around he is ki da mellow in his own way i know its just fanfiction but that is what i think sorry if it is to long
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