Reviews for What Happens in Vegas
dreaddragonknight chapter 12 . 11/15/2018
Good chapter, and good character development
dreaddragonknight chapter 11 . 11/14/2018
Oh my~ things are going to interesting places and I love the dynamics of everyone you have in this
dreaddragonknight chapter 10 . 11/14/2018
That was an amazing breaking the hero speech worthy of Jack Slash, well done.

Also I can sort of see how the way canon went that Harry kinda just went with the auror idea because it was the only one he knew about. Interesting ideas over all in the changes but wouldn’t Tonks be happy going so fast and such cause she seems like the type to love that sort of thing
dreaddragonknight chapter 9 . 11/14/2018
Well shit, why didn’t Dumbledore try a fucking thing like that before?! That seems like something he could have at least tried. Also the Voldemort soul piece getting free like that is ominous as fuck
dreaddragonknight chapter 8 . 11/14/2018
S9 wannabe motherfuckers that needed to suffer the wraith of Skitter...somehow
dreaddragonknight chapter 7 . 11/14/2018
I like how you handled most of that but I feel Dumbledore was a lot less subtle or as charismatic as he could have been made to be in the story and he seemed to lose control over himself far easier then regularly depicted.
Overall though good chapter
dreaddragonknight chapter 6 . 11/14/2018
You know I always just thought that werewolves weren’t wasting away but the constant pull on their magic to perform the transformation was like going overboard doing physical fitness stuff and then not getting the right treatment afterwords. Also a good explanation for magic well done
dreaddragonknight chapter 5 . 11/14/2018
Bonding! Huzzah!
dreaddragonknight chapter 4 . 11/14/2018
I understood those references and I loved both of them.

Also Willow and Raven bonding over the shitiness of prophecies
dreaddragonknight chapter 3 . 11/14/2018
Yeah having everyone you love die protecting you and such can really lead to a bad headspace and bad choices made.

Also all awkwardness and relationship issues incoming, where are Robin and Starfire during this? Cause this seems like the sort of thing they would want to help their friends with
dreaddragonknight chapter 2 . 11/14/2018
Poor Remus, also great job I love stories that have drunken shenigans in them
dreaddragonknight chapter 1 . 11/14/2018
Makes me sad that the Magical US is so much worse then Magical Britain in terms of racism and that I can’t really discount it because real life is a bitch full of idiots. Good first chapter it makes sense who is doing what in this and no one feels OOC
KalAeon chapter 8 . 10/8/2018
You've already used the undersides from worm and something about sharpshooter reminds me of Jack Slash, the group obviously isn't a direct port of the Slaughterhouse nine, but their interactions seem similar, so thats my guess.

Didn't realize I wasn't logged in. I dislike guest reviews.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/8/2018
You've already used the undersides from worm and something about sharpshooter reminds me of Jack Slash, the group obviously isn't a direct port of the Slaughterhouse nine, but their interactions seem similar, so thats my guess.
Guest chapter 17 . 9/16/2018
Holy balls that is a cool idea for killing Voldeeee
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