Oh, I really enjoyed this piece of work. Thanks for pointing me to this.

Great story plot and well written. Lots of funny bits in it as well. Good use of Arkady to help find our boys.

Great one-shot!
Well, yeah Eric, 'welcome to the matrix': there are other women outside of ops, really... interesting, that he always does compare her with Nell.

Oh, boy! That's a thrill and a half! You set yourself a real challenge to balance all these plot elements: Jason Beale, the Vegas Ban, and the rescue. Good work.

i can empathize with eric about having glasses when you are younger & then being teased at school
really enjoyed reading this and it was funny in parts
most excellent story

Brilliant just great can't wait for Nell s turn.

That was great! I hope you will continue :))