Reviews for The Clan of Samsara |
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RandoMando47 chapter 8 . 2/26 I’m not usually a fan of massive numbers of transmigrating people but the way you’ve had their bloodline, times and places of origin, and the place in the Naruto timeline make for an awesome story. Fantastic work coming up with that blend of elements and then tying the story to an SI trying to adjust to all of the differences. The antagonists and the developments all make a lot of sense and the potential benefits of the relationship between villages is clear. I’m very curious now how they plan to deal with the Bijuu in a way that’s not enslavement. Having one or two around would be way handier than for any other village but how do you convince an intelligent being to stick around and let you leech off them forever, if they can get bored and leave which will starve you how do you avoid that? Great story so far, I’m excited if you ever return to the story to see how you resolve that and the romance / kids with bloodlines plotlines. Madara seems like the sort that would latch onto kids really hard even if he doesn’t think he would beforehand. I suspect if things were speedrun with a timeskip epilogue this story could have a complete tag with as few as another 5 chapters. Thanks for the fun read and hope life has (or will begin to) treat you well. |
KvAT chapter 1 . 3/15/2023 This... is extremely interesting concept. I'm not particularly interested to read further, but the sheer concept of an entire clan, one which it's entire gimmick is being reincarnators, is a really novel and original one. I salute you authors, may you have a good life yet. It's just... wow, it's a really, REALLY amazing concept, for realsies. |
breakingheart93 chapter 8 . 3/7/2023 Oh my, now karma must face the music so to say I do wonder if she will allow it and if she will leave the clan or require Madera to enter samsara |
KingOfEmptyness chapter 8 . 2/21/2023 i presume this story is left for dead, wish it wasn't really had potential |
rawank7030 chapter 8 . 1/13/2023 oh woe is me! oh the agony of being stuck in a cliffhanger! am I doomed to this fate forevermore? |
Delicate Deer chapter 8 . 12/2/2022 Oh no you can leave me at this?! It was just starting to get spicy! Put me out of my misery please! |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/9/2022 Love your story, sad that is not finished ;( but I hope you are doing great 3 |
yesboss21 chapter 8 . 5/11/2022 Man, this fic br8ngs me back to the good old days of being young |
TheKursed chapter 8 . 5/9/2022 amazing |
Guest chapter 8 . 3/16/2022 This is one of my very favorite fics, and I hope you feel drawn to complete it someday. |
blinjaaa chapter 8 . 2/16/2022 6 years without update... jeez, are you even alive?! i'm genuinely concerned tho. if you aresimply don't wanna finish this, a simple chapter with “im fine but meh kinda don't wanna do this anymore. bye :D” would do it. either way, sad this story is wasted. i really like ur writing. |
Whysys chapter 8 . 11/7/2021 Oh Madara's crush is cute. I enjoyed this. I don't know how their vampiric lifestyle could work in a peaceful future but I love their clan dynamics and culture. Just a beautiful melting pot! I love partner dancing as well so I really enjoyed those moments. |
FreelanceBum chapter 8 . 11/8/2021 Half a year is way better than 6 years, lol. I really enjoyed this rather unique premise, sad it's dead. |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/19/2021 Kinda weird how karma looks like a female version of hashirama...is this intentional? I feel its intentional I also feel like the samsara clan are one trick ponies with their jutsu Cuz i was hopping for more flavors to their bloodline like some chakra black hole jutsu or pure chakra bending (like blood bending but with chakra or chakra/life sight like a discount hyuga or the eagle eye sight that all the assassins on assassins creed have I was hopping for some serious physical and pure chakra manipulation enchancements and boosted lifespans cuz they suck the life out of people making them super hard to kill like the uzumaki and senju, a lot like the dragon slayers from fairy tail, i was hopping for mini chakra eating. acanologias |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/19/2021 Too bad this is dead i really like the blended culture |