Reviews for The Sanctuary |
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The Green Eye chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 Interesting beginning! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
ripper34 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 Good story I can't wait for a update. |
Berret Kitty chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 Can't wait to read more! I've read your other stories and this promises to be just as good when you look at the concept and the first chapter. :) |
Melikalilly chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 I love this story |
Leticia Moriarty chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 interesting story so far |
Lunaria1147 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 I declare my undieing love for both your mind and your story's lol! This is really good I can't wait for another update |
BadGirlgoesworse chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 Nice! I'm looking forward to more |
Phantom Trainer chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 omg, great story idea! I loved your story "little seer" and I plan to read your other hp stories to, but this is great! keep it up! Phantom OUT! |
darkmoon1995 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 more |
jules chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 rather enjoyed this story so far - please continue soon. I could not find any major errors, so no worries there |
Miss888 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 So far so good! I'm interested as to where you plan on taking the plot. Hopefully some more back story as to why Harry and Teddy are fleeing. Also perhaps a better beta, because of mistaken use of words. Words that sound the same but are written differently with different meaning. For example: the one that stood out the most; "Nothing that cannot be salivated." Saliva also known as spit or salvage also known as to rescue. So the correct one is voldemort can still salvage the mess made by that vampire. Instead of voldemort salivates the situation. Anyways it's a bit annoying. |
geetac chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 I like the chapter |