Reviews for The Sanctuary
The Green Eye chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Interesting beginning! Can't wait for the next chapter!
ripper34 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Good story I can't wait for a update.
Berret Kitty chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Can't wait to read more! I've read your other stories and this promises to be just as good when you look at the concept and the first chapter. :)
Melikalilly chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
I love this story
Leticia Moriarty chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
interesting story so far
Lunaria1147 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
I declare my undieing love for both your mind and your story's lol! This is really good I can't wait for another update
BadGirlgoesworse chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Nice! I'm looking forward to more
Phantom Trainer chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
omg, great story idea! I loved your story "little seer" and I plan to read your other hp stories to, but this is great! keep it up!

Phantom OUT!
darkmoon1995 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
more
jules chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
rather enjoyed this story so far - please continue soon. I could not find any major errors, so no worries there
Miss888 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
So far so good! I'm interested as to where you plan on taking the plot. Hopefully some more back story as to why Harry and Teddy are fleeing.

Also perhaps a better beta, because of mistaken use of words. Words that sound the same but are written differently with different meaning.
For example: the one that stood out the most; "Nothing that cannot be salivated."

Saliva also known as spit or salvage also known as to rescue.

So the correct one is voldemort can still salvage the mess made by that vampire. Instead of voldemort salivates the situation.

Anyways it's a bit annoying.
geetac chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
I like the chapter
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