Reviews for Walk Two Lifetimes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is good so far and i can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() update soon, really like this |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Howcouldyougetmesoattachedtothesecharactersasjdkdlekmcjsooejfheamrcharacterdeathdamnittttttttttttt.) Oh, and is the Byakuya/Hisana thingymabob going to happen? Since the summary says Kuchiki Hisana. (That's just me haha goes and cries). The reactions were realistic, I think, in response to your question! :) Hope you update when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, only chapter 3 and I'm already crying. I always see crying about a story as a good sign that it's a well written and great story. Because on one cries over something they don't care about, and if I care then you've done a good job. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! thing are progressing very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting premise, and I will be following this. I've always thought that Hisana pretty much died of shame and guilt in canon. I guess that being a soul, your self image counts for a lot and I don't see her seeing any value in herself after abandoning Rukia in a slum and then getting married to a noble... Anyway, you've handled it well. guessing she'll start moving towards the Shinigami - she'll probably have to wait till Rukia is old enough and together because Seitirei is supposedly very hard to get into, family doesn't really get a pass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting, I loved the smile Hisana, I die because Byakuya interact with Hisana , updates soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY THIS IS ONE OF A KIND I FUCKING LOVE THIS SO MUCH ASDFGHJKL;'! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last part was cute. Can't wait for toddler Rukia |
![]() ![]() ![]() That Omake was great, I liked that she used the Smile of Doom. :D Also I liked that she is working with what she's got, which is mostly nothing so the fact that she joined a group seems more realistic for survival. The OC's were interesting and each seemed pretty unique with their own little niche in the group. |
![]() ![]() I like the story and hope it continues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. Haven't really seen this character use a lot. Hope you continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was awesome! Your writing is clear and easy to follow, your character is smart(and not unrealistically clever), and she didn't have a huge emotional hang up over her death. :D Your my writing hero. This is literally everything I want in a story and you have it! Thanks! |