|Reviews for A Surprise Guest|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2017
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Good! Please continue!
| dreamer 3097 chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
This is good
| velja chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
The story itself is cute and I like the characters you thought out. But you should really check your grammar, I mean the punctuation. It's terribly irritating to have to read each sentence twice, because in most sentences I don't get what you want to say because of a missing full-stop or semicolon. It disrupts the flow of an otherwise wonderful story.
Perhaps you could interest a beta-reader in checking it over?
Oh, and will there be more?
| Wolfhound159 chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
| Hey chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Nice one, just, please, keep an eye on your punctuation :)