|Reviews for Brightly Burning|
| Phoenix Lee Evyns chapter 9 . 5/30
Sorry to hear that, but it’s also understandable as well.
Maybe sometime in the future you will be able to come back to it, until then we can continue rereading it whenever we need a good story to relax by.
I love your hospital creation though, so will probably be using it as a ‘template’ or model for my own.
| Phoenix Lee Evyns chapter 7 . 5/30
Snicker, I can’t help but wonder if it’s one of the girls. Maybe not Narcissa, but possibly Andromeda?
| blackesparrow chapter 7 . 5/25
...is Regulus alive?
| blackesparrow chapter 6 . 5/25
Does Harry need reading glasses? I’m nearsighted and I actually prefer to take my glasses off when I read...
| h chapter 8 . 5/21
"With the number of Nazi sympathisers who turned to the Mafia during the second world war when trying to escape Germany, I'll have you know I've met more than a few very pleasant individuals. Completely morally bankrupt, sociopathic, and possibly as close to the dictionary definition of evil you will likely find, but also intelligent, well-spoken, polite, and just generally pleasant individuals. As long as they found you of an acceptable sort,"
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhHhhhh? i don’t care what the intention of this paragraph was, this is some uncomfortable nazi sympathizing shit. like if reborn’s POINT is that evil can hide behind a guise of good,,, then he failed, cus this makes it sound like he thinks they’re good people.
| Roserayrose chapter 3 . 5/21
so. good writing and all, but i feel it’s important to say that this story HEAVILY romanticizes unhealthy age gaps, heavily sexualizes an underage boy, and has a very disturbing obsession with virginity and pureness. the story is PERFECTLY aware of how old harry is, making sure to reference this constantly. characters all call him “kid” or refer to how “very young” he is. then in the next breath, reborn—a grown man—is having very inappropriate thoughts about said child. it is disturbing. i hoped it would get better the more i read—surely at least ONE character would intervene—but instead it only got worse. it is a damaging message for the many young, teen readers probably reading this story. im 17, same as harry, and jesssussss the idea of a grown man being into me like that makes me sick to my stomach. 17 is absolutely still a child. completely different maturity level and life experiences and interests and stage at life than that of a non-teenager. it is also obviously unnecessary—the author, from the authors notes, is a fully grown adult who ought to know better jfc, made the DECISION to have this story set shortly after the battle of hogwarts. there is no reason for this! it’d have been easy to say that the drain on his flames didn’t have serious consequences for a couple years! if harry were 20 it would be totally different—probably a bit ehhhh but fine ultimately. even 19 would be better. it’s so sus that he is 17 for no good reason than to romanticize and sexualize teenagers. ppl who go all pedo on minors make me want to scream. like, author, if ur reading this and have changed ur pov, sorry for being all aggressive or whatever, but i’ve been flirted with by enough grown ass disgusting men to find this appalling. if u haven’t changed ur poc for the love of god stay away from teenagers please and thanks
| SleepyPuppy chapter 9 . 5/1
is unfortunate that you have chose to discontinue the story, it is your choice as author. shell you choose to pick it up one day it would be greatly apperciated i believe by many other myself included. it's a great story. thank u for upl.
| Jorkier chapter 9 . 4/22
I was thinking of creating an OC story revolving around Reborn and I was wondering if I could use the name "Renato Sinclair" for it? I looked on the Reborn wiki and it wasn't there, as well as read the manga, so I figured you made it up. Would that be okay?
| Yuki Kira Phantomhive chapter 9 . 4/4
I feel sad. I really like your story and I want to see more. This is the 5th time reading this fic and I really liked the direction this was going.
| Verdantia Akalixi chapter 4 . 3/14
MRI machines don't wind down. They're always on. Basically, they need a large amount of constant electricity to maintain magnetization and you really don't just turn them on and off again unless it's an emergency. Like, it literally costs tens of thousands of dollars to turn them off and on again.
And seven hours? Uhhh... That's just a biiiiit longer than it would actually take for an MRI exam...
Sorry, that's totally trivial to the story and nitpicky I know, it's just I recently took an MRI/ultrasound class and couldn't resist! :')
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/20
This fic was literally the best harry potter x khr fic ive ever read im very sad u will no longer he writing it but it was good while it lasted!
| Rae chapter 9 . 10/25/2019
I weep for the death of this fic
| Mepoe chapter 9 . 9/10/2019
Bye, and good luck!
| AyaValkyrie chapter 2 . 9/1/2019
Ohh man ... why did you discontinue this story it's so good.
| T chapter 9 . 8/29/2019
Its a shame your leaving this fandom because i love this story but i understand why you want too. I just wanted you to know i enjoy your stories and hope to continue reading in wherever you move to next.