Reviews for New Wind Nation: Alliance |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope there’s a sequel to this as well! Definitely one of the best Naruto fics I’ve ever read and it captures the essence of Naruto and his behaviour perfectly! Loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved reading this and the previous fic! I'd love to see where this story could go! Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This history is amazing. I hope you will continue it one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really nice! I really appreciate the way you did the combat: enough did to get a feel for what’s going on, but not staying there and writing a blow-by-blow of the entire battle. |
![]() ![]() thank you for the story! and i absolutely adore how naruto and sasuke are still able to work together despite a whole village separating them. talk about teamwork that transcends time T_T also i love how gaara has changed from canon! he didn't immediately have a change of heart, it was a slow process that wore him down. he's an awkward bean T_T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was interesting. Naruto doing great/winning one on one and then assisting with two other battles was pretty great. Sasuke not getting the hickey mark was great. Gaara being a mentor was cute. Sasuke winning the tournament seems like bullshit. Hinata and Neji coming to some kind of understanding with less hostility on his part is nice. And Naruto mother-henning Gaara is funny. The only real disappointment is that they only had 3 high rank ninjas "prepared" to fight Orochimaru in this oh-so grand trap and the creep not only got away but with hardly a scratch. Clearly...they suck. Why on earth was Jiraiya not taking the fight seriously just cuz Orochimaru wasn't? That was a great opportunity to exploit in order to murder that traitor dead quickly. But he just...didn't. Like a dummy. Nice job regardless tho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep expecting you to point the finger at Danzo as the reason Kushina left Konoha. Even without the Kyuubi, Naruto would still be rocking the Uzumaki clan's legendary chakra reserves! That would make him a pretty tempting target for ROOT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Calling it Uzukaze no Jutsu would be hilarious and perfect. Just saying... |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAHAH RASA, YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'VE GOTTEN YOURSELF INTO! NEXT YOU KNOW, YOU'LL BE BEST BUDDIES WITH HIRUZEN AND A DOTING FATHER. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could wait five years more to read a sequel of this. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooh it was great! Can you dm me when you write the sequel? Or if you dont plan to? (Doesnt really have a time limit I will be happy if you respond in 2030) Anyway! Good luck with life or something ;* ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooo! The End! |
![]() ![]() Dududduuuuuun~ |
![]() ![]() Eeeereeey~ Character development~ Love it |
![]() ![]() wat. ... didn't see that coming |