|Reviews for Nouvelle|
| matchawave chapter 3 . 1/25/2015
It's absolutely fabulous. The characters are so IC that you predicted the actual plot of SnS ! In the last chapter, Akira won the Autumn Election ! I'm just like, wow what ? xD Can't help but imagine Akira challenging Erina to a Shokugeki !
Btw, your style is great: precise, objective, and yet I feel like you really enjoy writting the story, especially when you make it so difficult for Souma to talk to Erina. It's frustating for ME too ! :(
Anyway, there aren't lots of stories in the fandom unfortunately, buuuut your fanfiction count for hundreds of stupid fanservice one-shots ! I hope your work will inspire other writters, and of course you keep going with it.
Thank you very much
(oh and sorry for the mistakes, I'm french and I'm not very fluent in english xD)
| FuriousBlade chapter 3 . 12/14/2014
Love it, hope it'll be updated soon
| riveting tale chap chapter 3 . 11/25/2014
this story is great, loving it! :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2014
Please Please Pleaaaaseeee UPDATE ASAP!
wow... this is great and the character was so IC. i like this fic alot... and also i like both Soma and Erina pairing.
Just Pleaseee UPDATE!
i can't wait to read next chapter..
and i can't imagine what reaction Erina made if she knew that Soma the son of the man she admires or maybe like.
| Reignashii chapter 3 . 10/19/2014
Awesome story first Shokugeki no soma fan fiction to read and I'm enjoying it I like the couples u have too though iono bout jun and ...blanking out on his name lol
| sinkly chapter 3 . 10/9/2014
Yay, another post! Thank you so much, since you made my day brighter. I was stressed out from my long list of deadlines. I was glad to see that you updated. (Though I might have seen it later than I've expected.) But I'm still glad I was able to read another humorous chapter written by you. Keep up the good work.
| Sock my Rock chapter 3 . 10/6/2014
Personally I feel as if this is the best story on this fandom so far. It well written, from the plot to the actual characters, as I really like how your are taking to build our story. Not gonna lie I still Erina to be an annoying tsundere that everyone seems to love for some reason, but I'm hoping this story will change my opinion of her. Well best of luck with the coming chapters to come, and I hope to read more soon!
| Rintaro55 chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
With chapter 89 of SnS up, the whole Takumi refusing to take his mezzaluna back is now hilarious in hindsight.
| sinkly chapter 2 . 9/3/2014
OMG, I wonder what will happen next! I'm so glad you updated! I was feeling down since it was the last day of summer, but when I noticed that you updated your story it made me so happy. Basically saying, you just made my day.
I hope for more soon! Your writing style is great as always!
| DarkManta chapter 2 . 9/3/2014
Nice Story. that unexpected plot. I completly thought that Akira will use both Kuroba and Soma to face Erina. So Akira want Erina in her best when facing him include having the strongest partner. is in this story Erina still doesn't notice who soma's father? I can't wait to see her face ha ha
PS. Make it so there is shokugeki among girls with the winner get to date Soma ha ha ha
| DarkManta chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
So this is what would happend if soma was lost against Akira in Finals. well that intersting development we have here
| magic bounce chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
Job well done here :D I'm really looking forward to how this unfolds
Usually i have a hard time reading through some stories, due to really bad grammar but no problems here
Everyone seems pretty spot on to their manga counterparts, with a few exceptions, but like you said this is fanfiction, and liberties will be taken regardless
Hope this gets updated soon :)
| KurobaraIto chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Please continue this. Good opening for the story.
| sinkly chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Great chapter! Keep up the good work, can't wait or the next chapter. Your writing style is so good, wish I could write stories like that. Anyways, can't wait!
| DefinitelyNotAnApple chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Great start to the story. The writing style and quality is good and the chapter is quite lengthy too. However, there are a few errors or dips in quality here and there.
- I feel that in some parts of the story, it would be better to be short and concise and not decorate or dress up your words. E.g. " Alice showed no other emotion other than amusement as she spoke," just IMO this seems a bit wordy and could be phrased better
There are other parts that I also feel could be supplemented with one word and still keep your original meaning and intent
- Every now and then you'll forget to use question marks
- I spotted one accidental ellipsis of a word (there may be more)
"What you need Tadokoro?"
- I feel that with the karaage dish, it should be addressed as a plural and not singular i.e. [they'll] be swarmed by bugs vs it'll get swarmed by bugs. The food item itself is Karaage on a stick, so when Erina was ordering the duo around, I think she should be discussing karaage in plural form.
- the last line, "what big arrogance we just got" seems a bit...off ?
Please don't take my review too critically. This chapter was quite enjoyable and - compared to other fics - was written to a high standard. I am just being a bit nitpicky.
Please update. I am looking forward for more