|Reviews for A Diary of a Young Mufasa: Book 1|
| The Lion Queen chapter 26 . 11/2/2013
This was amazing! You are a wonderful writer! I hope to read more soon!
| Erica chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Great story and keep on writing it gets better when its done.
keep holding on
| s-s-l chapter 25 . 2/19/2008
Finally! i've been waiting to read this for a long time :D
| MinisterSweetGoodKid chapter 3 . 11/26/2007
This chapter was really good. We finally see what Mufasa is like with his family. First with his father... who is quite wise and knows when to be serious in a situation, especially with the hyenas. Mufasa and Taka's relationship is of course based on trying not to make the other feel bad, which Mufasa succeeds at but he's good enough to apologize to Taka. As for Sarafina, why am I sensing a betrothal between them? I guess Sarabi doesn't come in until way later huh... ah well. At least Mufasa and Sarafina have a bond. I like the idea of Mohatu being alive in this fic and him showing Mufasa the stars... that's better than with Ahadi doing it. I could never really picture that. Anyway good chapter!
| MinisterSweetGoodKid chapter 2 . 11/26/2007
So, the Pridelands Prince is presented to the kingdom and in his cub infant minds his thoughts, his surroundings and everything is coming together. Sweet! Nice job.
| MinisterSweetGoodKid chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
A very good introduction. You don't see these types anymore so I'm glad you would put something like this in. I'll be reading more for sure. You really caught my attention. :)
| Nala5 chapter 21 . 11/14/2006
A really interesting chapter to be sure.
Sarabi and Mufasa are so cute!
But anyway, I wonder if Mufasa is going to fight and destroy Ru-gal now?
I still can't believe that Ahadi would send them on a suicide mission...one that was meant for Mufasa!
What about Scar?
How come he isn't suffering?
Very interesting indeed.
And Busara...why does he have to die?
And does Sarafina care?
I guess we'll have to see.
I do like your character devolopment and the back stories.
And I must say that your story is much more clean and normal this time.
Well...as normal as cat Sci fi can get.
And yeah it's kind of neat that Sarabi would do that for Mufasa.
And the plot thickens...
At least Scar gave up...or so we think.
He'll probably try to hit on Sarabi the moment she's back in the Pridelands.
Then of course there's the hyenas.
They know too much.
Way too much.
I wonder what will happen to them...before the obvious stuff anyway.
So anyhow, I hope to see more soon...whenever you can manage anyway.
I love your story.
So until next time.
| Draco Aeris chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
You wrote a very good introduction, great description, i like it.
| GP King Lygerion chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
WOW you UPDATED AT LAST! That took long enough...but it was worth the time. Again I totally got enwrapped in the chapter and it didn't let me go one second! This Chapter was just too great (just like all your other chapters) to be ignored. So I Clicked the link, and was completely caught into the chapter once again. HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!
| Nala5 chapter 19 . 10/6/2006
This was so awesome and cute!
You just have to update!
I love Sarabi and Mufasa.
And admittedly I did like you other story, however sexually explicit it was it had a good plot.
So I'd really like to see at least this one finished.
The first version was so awesome, and I want to see how Sarabi finally gets through to Taka aka Scar that she loves Mufasa.
And if there is in fact some sort of fight involved...or maybe if Mufasa does come to Sarabi's defense next time.
Ya never know I guess.
Anyways, it's late so I've got to stop my reading now.
But I loved it!
I love all of your new chapters.
Call me a hopeless fangirl or whatever, but the Lion King is SO AWESOME!
I'll see ya next time with a review.
| GP King Lygerion chapter 21 . 8/24/2006
This story so far was was was was so full of emotion thrill, adventure. And how you described the life of Mufasa, Sarabi, Sarafina, and Taka, just beautiful! And the best part is, this excellent perfect story of yours is not even completed yet. It's story even greatly connects to my horror sequel: The Pride of Bloody Fangs (which you should read after reading The Liger and the Canine)When I began reading this story, I was instantly caught up in it, trying to find who the spy was all along, and how Mufasa was treated in the past by his father and the pride except his mother. I really want you to continue this story, because I want to know more! And I really can't wait for you to update this excellent story! So I hope you update soon!
| Nala5 chapter 15 . 6/26/2006
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!
Sorry I haven't been around for a while.
If you ever feel like finishing this, then know that I'll be reading it.
This is my absolute favorite pairing.
And if I ever get back into writing fanfiction then I'll certainly have to do something on them.
Now won't that be fun.
Anyways, this fic is the best and so are your others.
Although the first is always the better one.
Anyhow, I hope you've had as much fun writing this as I have reading it.
And if you're gone from fiction writing then you are.
And good luck in the real world.
All the best, don't ya know.
It's been fun.
| Spectre75 chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
I've laways liked reading Tigura's stories (just never reveiwed) and i've got to say the rewritten book one is even better thean the original even just comparing the first chapter shows how much better the description is
| Nala5 chapter 5 . 10/12/2005
I didn't think there was anymore to come.
However it's cool seeing some of that.
Still love the Mufasa and Sarabi romantic parts the best though!
It's still one of my favorite pairings no matter how many times it's done.
Glad to see your still online these days!
Have fun with your writing!
See ya next time.
| Nala5 chapter 17 . 8/13/2005
That was one of the best Sarabi and Mufasa fics I've ever read.
You're really a big Mufasa fan aren't you.
Quite a twist there with the White Lioness.
Well written and really descriptive!
So Nala's father is probably the other guy huh?
Like I said, yur a good writer.
So keep it up!
And would you mind telling me if my fanfic is any good?
If you get the chance that is.
Anyways, have fun with your writing!
What's a story without a little fun?