Reviews for Harry Black
Juliethobo chapter 21 . 10/9
The Omak falls flat. The original is much more nail-biting exciting.
Juliethobo chapter 19 . 10/9
I knew it. Harry corrupted our annoying but sweet Hermione.
Juliethobo chapter 14 . 10/8
Supreme Mugwump; is the ICW, not the Wo-zengamot. That is the Chief Warlock
Juliethobo chapter 8 . 10/8
Love your humour. I am laughing my arse off at Hermione's attempts to swear. I expect by the end of the story that Harry and Neville will have thoroughly corrupted her.
Juliethobo chapter 3 . 10/8
Good use of humour.
Juliethobo chapter 2 . 10/8
Why is it you can have the most highbrow conversation around a child and the one little slip you make with your language they will parrot?
Rune Tobor chapter 11 . 10/2
Someone should write a story about the afterlives of Dumbledore and Snape.
I would flip their genders just so can possibly experience being raped.
Don't be shocked, I'm sure Death Eaters did that to at least one girl.
You can have it happen off screen and just let it be mentioned as having happened.

Loop the offenders souls back in time, put them in some original characters or some of the fringe characters.
Sally Ann Perks is one of the fringe characters, she is a name and little is known about her.
GeorgeTobor chapter 25 . 10/3
It is simple, mortars, rocket propelled grenades, machine guns, these against a pureblood home will Destroy it!

Kill everyone who works for the Daily Prophet, EVERYONE!

KILL, DESTROY, most of the Wizarding World does NOT deserve Magic or indeed Life.

The Damned wizards turn on those who protect them!

Execute the Wizgamote.

But most of all...
Please update soon.
GeorgeTobor chapter 24 . 10/3
Harry has a small private army.
He needs to kill all the tools.
And take over the Wizarding World!



I noticed this story is not complete, let the blood flow until it is...
GeorgeTobor chapter 19 . 10/2
Unique way to have them find the Chamber of Secrets!

Ghosts are underused in fanfiction.
Myrtle died a fairly painless death, WHY is she still around?
It almost seems like the less reason you have to stay, the better your chances are to be a ghost.
Well in Harry's world anyway, Rowling is unreasoning.

Popular myth says ghosts have unfinished business, a parent dying while a child lives would be a reason.
GeorgeTobor chapter 18 . 10/2
Dumbfuck Dumbledore does not PROTECT the INNOCENT!

Albus trusts Death Eaters instead of his followers!

First, Last and ALWAYS, you protect the innocent, sometimes you need to KILL the GUILTY!

Redemption is HEAVENS business, not that of a headmaster.

One of the few things Rowling did right was kill Dumbledore.

I'm not happy about Vicky's death!
Rune Tobor chapter 10 . 9/30
Running joke?
I thought that was Ron Weasley...
After Albus The Lamest Good Dumbledore.

Ron's still in second place.

He does manage to beat Malfoy.
JustSoIcanSayIha chapter 8 . 9/30
Here's a REVIEW

Left for you!

Very Snarky GRIN!
Rune Tobor chapter 7 . 9/30
And the diary is dealt with just the way it should have been in the books.
If Albus Dumbledore was such a great wizard he should have noticed a horcrux entering the school.
If Hogwarts truly was the safest place in Britain then it should have prevented the horcrux from entering.

I hope you do something about the Dursleys, Lord Black could hire someone.

In a fic titled FATES GAMBIT they get what they deserve.
It's a Lunar Harmony.
Rune Tobor chapter 6 . 9/30
There is another story where Sirius raises Harry.
But they don't stay in Britain, so they are not found like this.

Hermione and Neville, they are good together.
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