Reviews for Venganza |
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Guest chapter 3 . 5/31/2019 Sess-sango love ,I blushed of you. |
Aijin chapter 14 . 1/20/2019 As always, excellent writing! So many lil details in this series will be my head-canon from now on. Love it! Thank you for sharing. Hugs |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 Only sick people would write something like this. I can't believe people like this pairing. This pairing is wrong on all levels. Kouga and Ayame pairings are NOT BORING. They are canon - NOT FANON. Kouga should NEVER be paired with anyone other than Ayame - otherwise it is wrong - especially pairing him with Kagura. |
Des-C-Kudi chapter 1 . 2/1/2017 Two years ago I read Venganza and somehow I forgot to leave a review (Usually I tend to leave a review when I liked a fanfiction). Well, here is my belated review. At that time I was looking for a good Inuyasha fanfic. I’m tired of the same pairings (Sess/Kagome or Inu/Kagome), so I was looking up short fanfics which includes Kouga. There were a bunch of Yaoi stories (which are not my cup of tea) and some in which he was paired up with Kagome and Ayame- Pairings which are really boring. And yeah so I found your story. At first I thought: “What the hell, Kagura?! The same woman who slaughtered his whole clan?!” But since your story had so many favs and reviews, I tried it out. And damn, I’m so glad I did. Absolutely brilliant. Although you have a quite simple writing style, you could portray so many feelings. The fluff, their inner struggle, the slow buildup of romance- hats off! Absolutely convincing without any OOCness. The only thing which bothered me: Somehow I couldn’t finish your story. I reached chapter 10 or 11 and then I couldn’t finish it (I can’t remember why. I know that’s weird. Maybe because of college stuff), although it is already in my favorite list. Currently I’m rereading it and it is just like the first time: absolutely lovely. Why my review is so long and I’m running riot: You accomplished something, which is mastered just by a few authors- because of this convincing tale you made me actually ship both because. You girl/boy, did a great job! Thank you! |
Guest chapter 14 . 4/28/2015 This is one of the best fics I've read - the development of their relationship was very well done. Thanks for this & keep writing! |
0o.'DeuS-EX-MachinA'.o0 chapter 14 . 5/13/2014 This is officially my favourite story on all of ! I swear, I felt like crying when it was over... Man...Seriously, I thank you for writing this wonderful masterpiece. May this story never be forgotten overtime. :) |
Guest chapter 14 . 10/19/2012 One of the most beautiful Inuyasha fics I have ever read! Thank you for this great read! |
untouchable hexing witch chapter 14 . 10/11/2012 I'm pretty sure I reviewed this 6 years ago when I first read it but just in case... I loved this fic. I really like this pairing so its such a shame they don't get a lot of attention but I'm so glad for this fic. The way your wrote the relationship is so awesome. Thanks for such a great read! |
CYLi chapter 14 . 3/31/2011 GYAAAAAAAAAH! You have no idea how enticing this story was! I stayed up all night to finish it LOL! If it weren't for spring break, I'll be screwed for my morning classes today. Oh gawd, where to begin? First of all, a most unlikely pairing, but you made their chemistry undeniably hot. Second, I am laughing my butt of here. "Fleshy yodeling" from a low youkai? I couldn't stop pounding on the table. Third, you managed to create a believable way for Kagura to resolve tension with the wolf tribe and be with Kouga. At first I was afraid the couple would never work out because of such, but alas, you never fail to surprised us. All thanks to Sango and her "beguiling" :D I love this so very non-canon pairing! And simply adore your writing style. Look forward to seeing more works from you! |
Nanyin chapter 14 . 12/23/2010 good stuff, need more stories! |
S chapter 11 . 11/2/2010 Okay, so I've read through Beso and Soledad and have developed a somewhat obsessive love for them. I adore this fic as well, but this chapter's conversation about dating and Kouga's dating history is... I don't know, not, in my opinion, up to par with the rest of your material. I think that in his own way, Kouga loved at least the idea of Kagome. Of course he didn't know her as well or have as deep a connection as he does with Kagura, but i think he admired her compassion, courage, etc, and saw her as more than just a shard detector. I think he truly believed he was in love with her, which I think would take perhaps more time and introspection to move on from than was explicitly given throughout Venganza. That said, i do truly enjoy reading Kouga and Kagura's interactions and I think that what you've written is beautiful and emotional, i think i just wanted to see a little more of Kouga's process of redefining what love means to and for him, and Kagura's exploration of feelings that she wasn't aware she could have. I don't mean this in any way to be a flame; I really do appreciate your work and I'm glad that you put it out to share! |
anonymous chapter 11 . 1/13/2010 "How many limbs [[to]] I have!" [[do]] |
anonymous chapter 5 . 1/13/2010 She'd never been this far South, before. It was [[definitately]] warmer… [[definitely]] A new place, with no ties to before. [the past]? She'd obtained her revenge against Naraku. Her powers were [[in tact]]. [[intact]] LOVE the story btw |
xdxdf chapter 14 . 12/13/2009 that was the best of them three that ive read! lol bink and bonk - gotto love em' |
xdfx chapter 11 . 12/13/2009 omg kouga surfing! hell that fits perfectly! |