Holy crap. I wrote this when I was 13 years old! And...hey. It doesn't suck nearly as badly as I'd thought it might.

I still kind of like this idea.

Those of you who asked me to finish it? Might get your wish...

So sad to see a good story like this die. That's probably what my fans are saying about LITTLE LOTTE, but when it's not there, hey, it's not there. You did a good job, even if it never goes any further. This place needs more Sunset Boulevard fiction.

Best Wishes,

NELLIE

Ooh...

Cool.

And Joe already lives.

I'm intrigued.

*jumps for joy* Gah! Sunset Boulevard, Sunset Boulevard, swamped with every kind of false emotion!

I really, really, /really/ hope there's more to this. REALLY. Cause I love SB. Adore it, introduced several of my friends to it. LOVE IT!

Ahem. Please, more? _

SQUEE!

*ahem*

I'll try that again.

It's a very sad fact that I'm probably the only person who's read this, since I'm the first reviewer. Sunset-fanficcers are, alas, a very rare breed; I know, I am one, and you reviewed mine, so I'm returning the favour.

But not just because you reviewed, no, no, no. Because I happen to like this. A lot. And if the opinion of one desperately-seeking-fanfiction writer is enough to convince you to post more, then please, do post more, because I want to see what happens next!

I'm very glad you let Betty go back to Artie. :) I'm of the opinion that if she and Joe had ever actually stayed together, they'd probably have ended up killing each other, even though it's eversomuch fun making them friends. :)

Sorry, I'm rambling. I'm just very excited and very very happy that someone else has put their fic out there, so I implore you - MORE!