Reviews for Gut Feeling
MerryLittleMess chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Fantastic idea, I loved it!
Biichi-gi chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
Never discount 'those feelings' I always say. And, yeah, I was in utter shock at the "hide in the refrigerator" gambit, but it ain't always a dumbo move, either. Except for the suffocation, that it.
This was a nice story. I like Wordy and thought it was sweet that he did follow those leanings, to everyone's advantage. Nice characterization and an enjoyable short story.
vguz04 chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
I am telling you. You are great at this. Just keep writing chapter 2 and 3 and you would have a story. Keep up the great work.
FreerunnerChez chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Short but sweet, I enjoyed it. It seemed like you really started to get into your stride, and I hope you'll consider writing some longer pieces in the future. I liked your portrayal of the team dynamic, it felt spot on.