|Reviews for Biomass Effect|
| KrankenWorgen chapter 15 . 8/7
skipped nearly 90% of chapters 12-14... were really tedious to read and this one explained all i needed to know, what i wanna say is that the 3 mentioned chapters were shit
| King of simps chapter 2 . 7/28
Im curious of they blacklight has evolved beyond sex can they have offspring like the asari with eny species or they cant have offspring at all
| JinxedKnight chapter 9 . 7/23
isn't there a squids on earth that can change their RNA
| JinxedKnight chapter 2 . 7/23
this reminds me of a love death reboots episode
| God of crossovers chapter 3 . 6/18
Considering that fractured minds are born from the thoughts, ideas and memories of the rest of the hive I wonder if it would be possible for a fractured mind to form based on a fictional or historical character
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 7 . 6/15
Good work. Also, a thought came to me that may seem plausible in the future. Could Blacklight’s evolution and adapting abilities be used for specific medicinal purposes? Such as curing the Krogan’s genophage’d sterilization? Perhaps even heighten the immune system of the Quarians? And what about for cloning? For the latter, Blacklight could use the multitude of scientists within its Hive Mind to gain samples of near-extinct species (like the Rachni Queen) and help repopulate their species/culture. What are your thoughts?
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 5 . 6/15
Aw snap! If I recall right; Mercer and Greene were two of the major players in Prototype! This is gonna be good. It’s also fitting to have them as the representatives!
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 6/15
A fascinating start! I’m not as knowledgable on either of these fandoms but I still like to read them and their ideas from time to time. This has especially gained my intrigue. So far it’s very good! Although I’m curious, are there versions of Humanity that aren’t from Planet Blacklight? Like, some that live in small communities that reside within the system of the Citadel Council? I assume there isn’t, but it IS something I’ve thought of.
| xScorpius chapter 37 . 6/12
Yes either more science or more dakka is the answer to every thing. Those and liberal application of nuclear fire.
| Mikael Skoglund chapter 64 . 6/9
Author, please start writing chapters again, this story is awesome and deserves to be properly written!
| Mikael Skoglund chapter 19 . 5/31
Did he forget that they brought medigel, and a supercoolant? Those things aren't pain, death or strife. Stupid Turian
| ScientistXXXX chapter 63 . 5/31
I am kind of Hoping for a Truce and Final Sybiosis between Blacklight Catalyst and The Children of Saleon let The Biological, And Cybernetic Biomachine Hivemind Singularities Merge one Final Last time Catalyst Itself Said it
It will survive beyond the heat death of the universe and unlike blacklight children of Saleon are much more superb at incorporating nonorganic matter to their own biology but the hivemind Trio of Blacklight,Thorian and Rachni will always have more affinity in biomancy that Children of Saleon whats more catalyst have a even larger genetic archive of sapient and nonsapient species that gone extinct as far a billion years to the past The benefits are all their too I wish to see the third singularity The Hybrid singularity thars born from merge of Bio and Cyber True Ascension awaits and after this there is still a lot they can do creating outpost fir every life bearing world to routinely collect uniique novel genetic and protein samples Expand beyond milky way into the entirety of local group and other neighbour grouos and further constantly inhabiting a larger portion of the universe creating aritifical ecosystems for novels extreme exotic biologies than leaving them alone letting the random evolution process generate even more exotic dnas and proteins liquid nitrogen abundant worlds where fauna make use of it in their biological functions, scroched worlds with thermotroph multicellular fauna and flora with microscopic heat engines in their cellular structures that makes use of heat based biological processes as offensive and defensive measures
Chemotroph multicellular abundant world with same logic same for radiotroph, electrotroph and kinetetroph worlds
Artifically created silicon based life planets for their novel proteins and dna
Nanomachine gray goo ecosystem world with artifical inducing forces to force evolution of digital cybenretic multicellular life
Injexting neutron stars with unique substances and eezo foled protein steuctures to artifically induce stron nuclear force baed life inside them
Planet ecosystems based revolving around black holes and so on benefits from the later evolution of novel genes and proteins from all these worlds later like hargrave speculated on crysis
(Jacob Hargreave speculates that, since the Ceph have such advanced technology that can create practically anything they can think of, their sole interest is in the things they can't think of, namely surprising proteins and organisms that evolution gives rise to over millions of years of adaptation. If this is the case, then the Ceph stationed on Earth are only an automated system programmed to wake up every once in a while to scout the planet for scientific data that might be useful.)
| Le type qui passe par la chapter 37 . 5/29
I mostly agree with you on the subject of plasma weapons against kinetic barriers (actually the plasma has a mass, which will make it stop by the barrier.
And you are also mostly right on the radiation), but you forgot things.
On the one hand there is the thermal radiation to take into account (which is on the one hand the main interest of such a weapon and knowing that a plasma is 11000 kelvin of average temperature) and on the other hand, it is necessary see if the hull of the ship is ready to endure the radiation of a plasma weapon because although the hull can be made to endure the radiation naturally present in space, a plasma weapon is by nature different and above all much stronger.
And it is also necessary to take into account the quantity and the speed of said plasma to see if the barrier arrives at the canceled because a greater quantity of plasma more quickly gives a greater kinetic energy.
Well you have a good point, I don't think you're quite right.
But like you said there's no plasma weapon in your story and even if there was, it's your story, so you can do whatever you want.
So please don't take this message as an attack on you, I love your story and I'm eagerly awaiting its sequel.
| R4x4s4 chapter 64 . 3/28
I believe this is one of the best Crossovers between Prototype and another franchise ever written, but it is noticeable that it became complicated and dragged on too much, to the point of the story becoming saturated, especially after the children of Saleon, basically the reapers are already a very hard enemy. unlikely to be defeated without half the galaxy or a large part of it being destroyed in the process, and the organic and mechanical synthesis makes them almost impossible to be defeated without a God X machine happening or a very forced solution appearing, a story thus complicated and too extensive it ends up boring, you keep waiting for an outcome and it never comes, things just become more and more problematic.
| Meiflower chapter 50 . 3/13
This is less of a comment on your fic and more of a comment on everyone elses comments. Why are they all being so nitpicky. Just chillax and vibe with the fun piece of writing.