damn shame you made sasuke gay
although you could say he deserves it for the actions of his canon self

Oh from the reviews it sounds like this was abandoned that explains why it feels like there was way too many plot points still up in the sir for only two chapters to resolve.

This has been an interesting story so far, thank you for sharing it.

With two chapters left I am now very concerned how the various plot points will be wrapped up unless it just ends casually after the fight with Pein?

Not touching on anything after that and skips over all the training for senjutsu of course.

I’ll admit I’m a bit concerned as it feels like there is still a whole bunch of plot lines open and only 4 chapters left to finish it off.

I’ve been loving this so far, wven though everything feels a bit rushed at times and everything training arc is just outright skipped over.

U a faggot how is he gone restore his clan

Yeah, I remember why I downloaded this story. It's really fooking good, when's the next update?

This may as well have ended here. This was a beautiful sane!Sasuke, Mokuton!Naruto, confident!Hinata, NaruIno fanfic. Not too obnoxiously OP, decently handicapped if needed, and gay Sasuke made me laugh. This is nice! Thanks for this!

That was a completely unexpected southpark reference well done.

Pointless time skip way to common...
Way to prove the whole training trip is alway the weakest plot ever made... sure i am a fan of naruto.. but always hate how dull that plot is waste years for what alittle no Increase in strength. Should be inrease in rank...

I liked the story. I think Naruto with mokuten makes a lot of sense.
Hiruzen actually pushes Sasuke and Naruto to bond makes a lot of sense.
Sasuke and Naruto being on friendly terms like brothers is really nice development.

I liked at the beginning that Hinata got a lot of development in the beginning. I think she had a lot of potential.
But I don't get why Hinata suddenly brother zoned Naruto. I feel like it wasn't natural in any way.
Ino X Naruto could have worked but it was rushed and introduced too late. It kinda feel she just saw that Naruto is successful now so she switched to him.
It especially weird because before she was just a fan girl without any relevance.
I think that Naruto X Hinata would be much better choice. Heck I would prefer Naruto X Sasuke in this case. And I don't like Yaoi.
Heck make it a harem for god's sake. In this scenario it would work better from narrative perspective.
Another thing, Hinata X Shino ? Really ?

Last thing I think that Pain is kinda boring here. At least in the canon there's a serious clash of ideals between Naruto and Pain.
But here it felt that he's like random evil guy who wants to take over the world.
The whole point of the Pain arc is to show that konoha is not always the good guys.
Pain's attack is a reaction to events in Ame that were orchestrad by Danzo.

I sorry if it comes out a bit over critical. I really enjoyed this story even with the flaws I saw.

Anyone know if the dude is still around?

Yeah no, this is fucking cringe as fuck. He has ‘wood release’ but can’t even use it properly, and everyone who sees it is basically just like “meh”. He’s apparently really strong yet gets his ass kicked in every chapter. I’m dropping this shitty trash fic here before I lose anymore brain cells reading this shit.

Getting kinda cringe. Hoping the rest isn’t like this or I’m gonna have to drop this

i love the way this story is put together

oh yeah also Naruto's canon upbringing minus the starvation attempt