Reviews for Loves Awakening
FlorLola chapter 1 . 8/27
There were a few mistakes here and there, typos and some weird sentences or paragraphs. I’m guessing either you were high on an inspiration-fueled rush, or English’s not your mother tongue. I was still able to understand and enjoy the story, though. I was sweet and hot in all the right places, and I honestly liked it
Angel Eyes Kiyone chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
Epic is right! Loved this fic! You should do another chapter! With more lemons!
Akida-san chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Perfect!
Cotton Blossom Diva chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Freaking Epic is right! Amazing...I'm otherwise speechless. This was amazing.
SereStarOfGaea chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
I control my dick! Hahahahaa that Was just epic! I had so much fun reading this
msuarez95 chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
excellent! very hot, very erotic, while still staying relatively realistic. -applause-
Menel chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Will there'll be any sequel for this...? Hope it will! Hahaha! Good job!
Otaku of Anime chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
Shit that story was long but it was an amazing read. Is there any other erotic stories from you?
Cindi chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
Very good. I liked it.
Lola Rogers chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
Awesome Story!
love for edward chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
I could tell that you haven't really written in first person before because there were some times where you would slip into third person... With that being said, I did really enjoy the story. I thought it was fun and sort of fitting that you made mina bi. I loved how the relationship between mamoru and usagi was more than just bickering like it was in the 90s anime. The way you ended the story, however, left me wanting more. I sincerely hope you plan on doing a sequel to this.
Thank you for the good read.
Ariel
Roxas fleur chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
well it was good. it totally showed their love. I love it!
alPhha chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
Well written! Loved it
Marie Allen chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
This was great :) I love that they have been friends...and of course it would take a jealous moment for Mamoru to finally lay it down lol.
GraphicsChyk chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
I've read this twice now. Really love it hope you write more!
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