The vindictiveness against Pettigrew is wonderful c:

“Harry had been secluded in the Muggle World; he had made sure of that.”
Hi, yes, let’s throw stones at him, please 3

This simple sentence filled me with anger because how can you treat an innocent child in such a manner? And that goes for canon!Dumblebitch too! Bro left a CHILD to be emotionally, mentally, and physically abused to create the “perfect weapon”.

I need to go re-watch the scene of him falling off that tower to calm down xD

Okay because I was about to say! Like I know Dumbledore is not about to miss such an oversight. Even though I’m sure everyone reading would live to see the man progress his downfall xD

Plot continuity error: How would Dumbledore think Voldemort doesnt know about Harry being missing when it was mentioned in The Daily Prophet? Surely, he’d think Voldemort would be keeping tabs on the newspaper regardless of how rubbish it is.

Crazy idea, what about Tonks for Barty or would she sitll struggle with him on that front? I def like the fact that he isn’t with Hermonie in this one! Love her but not for him lol! Love the new content! Cannot wait to see how the tournament goes! (Another idea, how bout Charlie for Barty, unless your sticking to a woman if so maybe Daphne?)

update very soon miss this store

Thank you for an enjoyable chapter.

Где суд над дамболдору?

Сюжет не плохой, но одно но Поттер сдесь пед*к

Сюжет очень хороший и я надеюсь он законченный

Очень слабая 24 глава, я думал больше крови

Где избиение дамболдору он стал лордом, но все ровно подчиняется где логика. Где требование вернуть семейный гриммуар.

9 глав соплёй когда что то не будь произойдет

OMG I LOVE THIS AHAHAHA (also i'm not sure if its meant to but when they start talking about azkaban it kinda skips over the fact that its azkaban they are on about :D)

As always i love your book thank you for writing and i think harrys gonna win it will be interesting how you write whats going on ill keep an eye out for the next chapter whenever its ready