Очень слабая 24 глава, я думал больше крови

Где избиение дамболдору он стал лордом, но все ровно подчиняется где логика. Где требование вернуть семейный гриммуар.

9 глав соплёй когда что то не будь произойдет

OMG I LOVE THIS AHAHAHA (also i'm not sure if its meant to but when they start talking about azkaban it kinda skips over the fact that its azkaban they are on about :D)

As always i love your book thank you for writing and i think harrys gonna win it will be interesting how you write whats going on ill keep an eye out for the next chapter whenever its ready

Love the new chapter.
You had Sev so in character. I have to leave my projects then no one else is looking after Harry if he needs potions they are going to be mine!
Barty may find someone while he is minding Harry which would then get him both in trouble with Voldy and stirred mercilessly by Harry.

I absolutely love your story and I look forward to more updates.

Si Dumby ne traquait pas Harry, il n'aurait pas d'histoire.

Welcome back! This chapter is a joy to read and review, Debs. Thank you for posting it, and please continue when you may.

Hmm... May harry win his first tournament?
Maybe. It is also just as likely that he may win second or third place or even.. GASP! 88th!

All kidding aside, Debs, I believe that Harry may win his first tournament. *warm grin*

hope u post more chapters love the update

hm... this chapter is confusing ... and has some errors.

During breakfast or shortly after they check the mails Corvus leaves but suddenly he is back sipping his coffee. (As his sons are bickering with each other.)

Later in Voldemorts office you also listed Rabastan two times and missed Rudolphos.

And did I miss the meeting? Somewhere I got lost.

I love this story

Hahaha Harry and Luna ar such gremlins and love causing trouble for others. Harry does care but by giving vague answers to seem impassive actually works for him so noone knows how to counter him. Love the kiss and can’t wait to see more betwen them

Well written indeed! Love it!

Can't wait for you to post more chapters of this great story that I found by accident.