That song was really good, now I'm so curious how the music would pair with it.

Why would you make percy have a fucking panic attack right then?! That’s so cringe… it’s kinda putting me off the story

I fail to see why Percy would think it’s the gods fault for annabeth dying. When writing you have to make people feel organic and when it comes to fanfiction you actually have to think about the character and how they would react to certain events. Percy wouldn’t hate the gods, the idea that he hated them comes purely from the fandom and writers that like to make OP Dark Percy fanfiction. He would blame monsters and more then likely Gaea for her death.

awwww

lukabeth is crime. BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
jk

Please continue

When will you update again my dear?

For I second I thought i read May Castellan, not May Carson, and I was like, what the fuck?

So, Luke was just acting as her boyfriend? Wow. Big blow. Please update this! a good story deserves to be continued.

Is May in love with Nico, but also in love with Eric, but Eric lover May and Nico doesn't have romantic feelings towards him, so it is a love triangle?

Bollywood is really about that.

lol! I love the nicknames! You're Indian? Same!

Taco. Typical Carter. Lol.

Can u plz continue

Y r u no updating. Get Gud . Write the damn story pls. Its honestly something u shud keep going.