|Reviews for Love, Pain, Greeks and Egyptians|
| Cayde07 chapter 28 . 7/13
That song was really good, now I'm so curious how the music would pair with it.
| lukejmontier1 chapter 5 . 3/10
Why would you make percy have a fucking panic attack right then?! That’s so cringe… it’s kinda putting me off the story
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 1 . 1/26
I fail to see why Percy would think it’s the gods fault for annabeth dying. When writing you have to make people feel organic and when it comes to fanfiction you actually have to think about the character and how they would react to certain events. Percy wouldn’t hate the gods, the idea that he hated them comes purely from the fandom and writers that like to make OP Dark Percy fanfiction. He would blame monsters and more then likely Gaea for her death.
| Krypton Writes chapter 42 . 10/19/2022
| Krypton Writes chapter 16 . 10/18/2022
lukabeth is crime. BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
| Dk676 chapter 42 . 9/28/2022
| Njord-Kraken chapter 42 . 1/27/2022
When will you update again my dear?
| Person chapter 18 . 9/21/2021
For I second I thought i read May Castellan, not May Carson, and I was like, what the fuck?
| TheGirlofManyFloods chapter 42 . 4/23/2021
So, Luke was just acting as her boyfriend? Wow. Big blow. Please update this! a good story deserves to be continued.
| TheGirlofManyFloods chapter 30 . 4/23/2021
Is May in love with Nico, but also in love with Eric, but Eric lover May and Nico doesn't have romantic feelings towards him, so it is a love triangle?
| TheGirlofManyFloods chapter 26 . 4/23/2021
Bollywood is really about that.
| TheGirlofManyFloods chapter 23 . 4/23/2021
lol! I love the nicknames! You're Indian? Same!
| TheGirlofManyFloods chapter 7 . 4/23/2021
Taco. Typical Carter. Lol.
| Guest chapter 42 . 1/10/2021
Can u plz continue
| Bruh chapter 42 . 11/22/2020
Y r u no updating. Get Gud . Write the damn story pls. Its honestly something u shud keep going.