Reviews for Love, Pain, Greeks and Egyptians |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I've always enjoyed stories with uncommon ships as there is so much potential. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the story so far! Keep on going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice update :) |
![]() ![]() U ARE AWESOME "CRIES A BIT" |
![]() ![]() U ARE THE BEST FAN WRITER OF RICK RIORDAN THE BEST:)) |
![]() ![]() ITS GREAT AS HELL IF U GET WHAT I MEAN :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well ad luck then I don't forgive you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Carter being smart and all, I'm certain he'll connect the dots... Greekdemi god man named Poseidon, who is Is his father, coincidently shoes up when needed plus the ocean |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhh! How on earth are they going to explain that to Carter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't take so long to update again, after this cliffhanger you need to update fast |
![]() ![]() no offense, i love your work, but could you not portray her as a daydreamer around percy? if you know whatt i mean, she is kinda fierce and brave and stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WTF...not a fan, not a fan |
![]() ![]() Just.. I can't read this pity party anymore. Boohoo your girlfriend died, that sucks, but come on man, this is just pathetic. Nobody would react like this, for this long. It's actually causing me pain to read. It's an insult to actual people who have emotional problems. As a person with a type of depression (a albeit a minor one) it's kind of painful to see you making Percy seem so... Pathetic. |
![]() ![]() This is the best story ever! But it is very sad that percabeth was destroyed. But at least he ends up with someone like Saidie Kane. I like how the relationship started. By the way I have a suggestion for you. I think it would make this story really good if The thing that you said about people not approving the relationship, what if Isis and heacate swap their powers because they thought it would drive them apart, but it just makes them love and understand eachother more, and after a while they manage to win their own powers back. Please add this in! To me this is the perfect bonding/adventure thing! So yah, one more thing I suggest. I suggest that Percy gets to see the Brooklyn house and Saidie sees camp half blood. Please add these two things and I will be very happy. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() plzzzzzzzz update earlier im dying for the next chapter. otherwise its all great |