Reviews for Lupi della caccia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A boy and his dog... This version is alot more interesting than it's predecessors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok. two things. smaller thing first: the chapter is kinda short. not complaining too loudly here, it's passable... just wish it were longer. secondly, for the love of god man, proofread your bloody work man. so many simple grammatical errors are not picked up on by spellcheckers, and words can even be distorted, such as even becoming ever thanks to autocorrect. that said, don't get me wrong: I love this fanfic, and want you to continue writing. seeing an update appear in my notifications inbox is one of the highlights of my morning/early afternoon. just... you've let the quality go, man. simple stuff too. I would recommend finding a good beta-reader whilst you're at it as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That thing is long gone. Suppose this either means there's three or is the gore the same one that Joseph is using? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, so Celes has a Kirin for a creature partner, an Elder Dragon, very interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never could figure out why Kirin was classified as an elder dragon, all the other dragons look like, well dragons, even Ceadus looks like a sea dragon mixed with a whale |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, Zane got post traumatic stress disorder! That doesn't bode well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your back, and the bad guys return with you. Maybe I should have Albert meet Cain and Khan not knowing who they are... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, so that's what Zane been doing while Joseph and Ivy were busy in the Flooded Forest huh, interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry I changed from a bowguner To a s&s user |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find it extremely clever and amazing how guys have a group that contains different povs so that every corner of the story is covered. Keep up the good work guys! I have read all of you guy's work. Big fan of your guys' work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One thing I forgot is he is a rank 9 Bow gunner |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so I thought I might Submit an oc Name: miles wolf Looks: black curly hair. Dark brown eyes We're glasses tan skin skinny and around Average hight Personality: always saying jokes Only serious. When on hunts. Loves to Read and will always read up on monsters Before hunting them and always plans Almost everything . If you are planing to give monsters to the Ops his favorite monster is the Monoblos And if you are mabey you could add a Monster tordement were tamed monsters Try to flip each other over to win And the prize could be a great set of armor |
![]() ![]() This is brilliant keep writing. I'm on the edge of my seat. |