Reviews for Lupi della caccia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey that peco got a headache right and fenrir got the cure |
![]() ![]() ![]() *growls* friggin silver rathalos |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... this will officially make the first time I've submitted an OC to another person... let's see... Name: Leah Foucalt Personality: Energetic; Professes herself an intellectual when accused of being a nerd; Likely to spout random monster facts; Becomes intensely focused when on a hunt, sometimes forgetting she has team mates to watch out for. Hobbies: Raising Kinsects, Reading (often research papers on monsters) and Hunting Hunter Rank: Low Rank 5 Hair Style/Colour: Brown, Shoulder length, Wavy, Loose Cascade Eye Colour: Indigo Weapon of Choice: Insect Glaive |
![]() ![]() Still haven't answered my question about Oc's. Anyways, great but short chapter. Hope to see a quick update. |
![]() ![]() Definitely their uncle or someone higher up in the guild is behind this. By the way can we request OC appearances in the story. I'll wait before trying anything. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() Um... Dude? Did you remember to proofread this chapter? Because the spelling is atrocious. |
![]() ![]() If he goes to val habar, there should be more hunters willing to accept Fenrir. Especially with the fact he guildmaster himself probably wanted Dalamadur as pet if it wasn't gonna destroy everything. But what about the long term effect of the frenzy on Fenrir. Will he become an Apex monster?or stay the same magically. Maybe tragedy will happen. Hope to see another update soon . P..S there are a lot of grammer and spelling errors throughout the chapters. But depite that its a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() if someone manages to tame a Deviljho, the only thing I can say is... good luck covering the food bill |
![]() ![]() ![]() Someone has been playing too much 4 Ultimate XD but srls tho good chapter. |
![]() ![]() I relly love this storry and hope to see more som day |
![]() ![]() Good start. I noticed some small errors, but it was enjoyable to be sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man their uncle sounds like a scumbag. The story and dialogue is fine and to the point which i like. I Just wish the chapters were longer. Looking forward to your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool he has the ultimate wolf wyvern companion. they say dog is man best friend well he got the best dog! wouldn't want to be seen on a lawn of anyone who owns a zinogre. even if it was friendly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your story and it very good, little question, why do you spell more, mpre? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hell yeah this is an awesome story and a wonderful idea. you have a really good thing going here. Aside from a few spell mistakes it was really good. I cant wait to see what happens next! |