Reviews for To Be A King |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You missed a few line breaks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked the fight scene |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have I said that I love this story? 'Cause I do! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...that Merlin's a magical DragonLord King? I LOVE IT!11 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am absolutely loving it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously amazing story. Still in denial about how the show ended lol; I’ve been addicted to reading fic for Merlin and I really loved your work. It was an incredibly satisfying story and so thrilling to see the cool ideas and concepts you incorporated in such a thought out, realistic way. Seriously love it and can’t wait to start reading the sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been such an amazing ride thank you very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() I... don't have the words to describe how amazing this story is. Seriously, it's amazing. The characters were perfect - they all behaved and reacted exactly how I would imagine them doing in the series. Your grammar and spelling was near-flawless, which I'm extremely happy about as that seems to be a rarity on this site. And on top of that you obviously know HOW to write a good story; the pacing, the descriptions, the action, the dialogue, it was all very well written and put together. I was completely immersed in the world of the story and stayed up far too late reading it, which in my opinion is the mark of a very good story. And the ideas in the story itself are just really cool. The whole "Merlin is actually royalty" thing has been done quite a few times, and you've managed to make it fresh and interesting and entirely your own. I particularly loved what you did with Mordred's character; his whole storyline in the series is really quite tragic, and I'm glad he gets to be happy in yours. Oh and speaking of characters, the OC's in your story have all managed to be well-rounded and play integral parts without detracting from the focus characters and the overall story - it's refreshing to see, and very enjoyable to read. I'm honestly trying to think of some constructive criticism, but other than the rare typo that I can't even remember where are anymore, nothing's coming to mind. If I do think of something, I'll be sure to let you know. If you haven't already published your own fiction, you should consider it. Seriously. I'd definitely read your stories :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely amazing! It's everything I've ever wanted in a royal Merlin fic- heck, it's everything I've ever wanted in any Merlic fic! The emotions are raw and authentic, and I love seeing Merlin's great power acknowledged along with his limitations. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so much! You kept all the characters perfectly in character! |
![]() ![]() omg |
![]() ![]() This is amazing! You are great at telling stories. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is the sequel called? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this great story. I have read it more than once and it never gets old. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is amazing and I have been binge reading it omg you write so well and everything you've done is so in character it's amazing. the only comment I wanna make is that it doesn't entirely make sense for Morgana to want the throne of Carthis. She's always seen the throne of Camelot as her birthright, has she not? Why would she waste her time trying to steal another kingdom when she's already got her eye on one? |