Reviews for To Be A King
Guest chapter 27 . 10/17/2018
This was beautiful. It leaves that warm fuzzy feeling of content and hope.
booksfoodmusic-minion chapter 28 . 10/9/2018
I've just binged this in 2 days and I don't have the words to say how much I love this! Merlin able to be himself! Recognised for his importance! Mordred being okay! And Authur accepting Merlin and magic!
clotpolesforever chapter 27 . 8/10/2018
GAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! Ok, calming down now. I loved this so much! I'm printing this out so I can have a hard copy for rainy days or when my computer crashes. Go you! A for perseverance and WORLD-BUILDING, agh! Just, just... AND THE ENDING WAS BEAUTIFUL AND NOW I NEED TO GO READ THE SEQUEL AND ANYTHING ELSE IN EXISTENCE PERTAINING TO THIS AWESOME MASTERPIECE! (Sorry for capslock, it got a little stuck, lol.)
clotpolesforever chapter 25 . 8/10/2018
Gwen, Leon and Gerund are all different variations of the mum friend and no one can convince me otherwise! Also YAY for bromance between the lads! And Raime is just adorable all 'round.
clotpolesforever chapter 22 . 8/10/2018
HI! This is just glorious! All of it, all the things! Especially Merlin with his creature comforts, gah! Yes, pamper my poor baby! Anyhoo, the real reason I wanted to leave a review on this chapter: no idea if you still look at the reviews or if it's already been addressed, but I was just wondering how old Raime was? Because he's referred to as a boy and a young man and believes himself able to go to war? I'm personally headcanoning him as maybe 14-ish. But that's just me.
TheSilentFury chapter 28 . 6/29/2018
I found this story. I read it all in one go. No stopping. It's 3:26 and I am tired but I will find the sequel
Murasaki Hina chapter 28 . 6/22/2018
I felt as if it would not be fair if I didn't compliment your exquisite writing style and character portrayal. I fell completely in love with this story and even at the last chapter, didn't want it to end. I'm off to read the sequel now!
Guest chapter 22 . 6/16/2018
Okay Severus
Guest chapter 19 . 6/16/2018
I imagined Gwain pulling out a Glock from his hair or ass and pointing it at Merlin and yelling "GET IN THE FUCKING CHAIR!"
Guest chapter 18 . 6/16/2018
I could hear this. Especially the "He isno better than Uther." I mean like, I got chills
Guest chapter 16 . 6/16/2018
I like how Merlin's new compliment is "Your father would be proud of you", while that was Arthur's old compliment. Now Arthur's is "Merlin would be proud of you" while Merlin's used to be 'Arthur would be proud of you.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/16/2018
Okay girls you're both pretty, can you get along now?
Guest chapter 13 . 6/16/2018
*Gwaine trips Arthur while they walk*
Guest chapter 12 . 6/16/2018
The Pale Lady strikes at a time in which is not her own. In a land off and beyond, to her sworn enemy hidden only by a veil of her own arrogance.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/15/2018
Youv'e captured everyone so perfectly. I might cry
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