Reviews for To Be A King |
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![]() ![]() Youv'e captured everyone so perfectly. I might cry |
![]() ![]() I have like 10 pillows on my bed. I'm currently reading this in a fort made of pillows, blankets, couch cushions, hot glue, and sheer is why I live |
![]() ![]() Merlin is slow, if his aunt's had been alive don't you think that they would have created them? At the very least sent their regards to the poor boy as he was collected |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really exciting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() C'est magnifique! I loved this! Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, literally everything about this story is perfect to me! Thank you so much for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the most perfect thing ever, oh my word! Kilgharrah is the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've come back to read this story a second time, and I noticed something I missed the first time around! Namely, the parallel between Merlin and Arthur when facing accused children. The way they both knelt down, and the way the asked for the child's name, and the merciful ruling, those really show that they are two sides of the same coin. I absolutely loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I LOVE IT! It was extraordinarily! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well written suspenseful plot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's wonderful that Merlin is now friends with Mordred. I disliked how ruthless he was to Mordred and how undeserved that was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. It's over. What am I going to do with my life? In all seriousness, this story is amazing! I usually lurk like some sort of creepy fanfiction gremlin and don't comment on fics but yours is a masterpiece! The characters we delightfully realistic and even the OCs were gorgeously crafted. I adore the relationship between Merlin and Mordred! You're a terrific writer and your writing style is glorious. I'm going to go an read the sequel because I've run out of adjectives to describe your story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Magnificent story! Brilliantly thought-out and well written! Fantastic plot too. Thank you for the good read! Hope to read more great things from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() before reading this masterpiece of fiction. I ware in a bad place. always looking down on myself in life. But! after reading this, it help me to stop looking down on life. now 2years later can I say one thing. THANK YOU! |