Reviews for Deadly Eyes of a Phoenix Reborn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wait a mf minute man ALBUS BLOODY DUMBLEDORE DID WHAATTTTTT |
![]() ![]() ![]() In all honesty this was a much better story than I was expecting. I first found it on AO3 and according to your authors note it's an awful thing due peer pressure. I hate that the toxic nature of several members of the fanfiction community caused you to change the direction you were originally going to take this. However I enjoyed how you wrote Hadrian and how the canon events differed from the original. Personally I would enjoy seeing a rewrite of this where Harry used his creature abilities more. It seemed that the only one he actively used was the flame travel, and there were lots of offensive possibilities with his others. However this is your story and you should write however makes you happy. Ignore the idiots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this fic. It is very well-written, and I loved the story plot. It's definitely worth the time to read it. |
![]() ![]() I loved this! Honestly couldn't choose between laughing and crying for some of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaah me encanto, no tengo mucho que decir, pero no me esperaba el final jaja fue bueno |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a book that makes me smile |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are a brilliant writer, loving the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is Harry being so retarded in this fic? He's known about voldemort's plans for almost a year, and he was even aware that he's being set up, so why hasn't he tried to sabotage those plans? Even canon Harry wasn't this dumb smh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As creepy as that sexual assault scene was, I nearly laughed to death when Harry freaked about the thought of the man being a cannibal lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve had this downloaded to read for a while now and I’m STILL debating whether I want to read it or at least skim it, because of the warnings in the description and some of the spoilers in the reviews. It seems like it would be angsty and I very rarely want to read something that’s likely to make me cry, because I’ll have to keep taking my glasses on and off. |
![]() ![]() I agree with you whole heartedly. Being a writer myself, I know hard it is to spend literally hours thinking of the plot and how proceed, while also being careful to not leave any plot holes and cliffhangers at the end. Then readers just Co.e up and say "I thought I'd find a good story, but just shot. Not even worth reading". Kinda kills the enthusiasm |
![]() ![]() ![]() How the hell does he know about lingerie when he doesn't about rape. No hate tho |
![]() ![]() I can’t finish this story…too much angst and I wanted a story that was romance and humor smh. Oh well…I’m done reading. I won’t read the rest but I’ll check out your other stories though |
![]() ![]() I hope this the LAST chapter about Dumbledore because I can’t take much more angst and talking about the baby or the repeated raped by Dumbledore. Let’s just move on because I can’t finish the story if you don’t. I hate angst |