|Reviews for Water Wings|
| Cordiaonfire chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
This was so good... like, absolutely, positively amazing... nothing will ever top this, EVER!
| Mirruu chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
Thi is golf! Great fic, so beautiful!
| Kaoru likes One Piece chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Beautiful, just beautiful. Thank you
| BrainDeadMaggot chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
I have had this story opened on my tablet since its posting.., but I kept putting it off I have no idea why.., -_- *bow* my apologies..,
This is absolutely gorgeous.., I looked up the song and it's really cute.., very Luffy.., I didn't listen to the whole thing tho, just up until that verse, but it's very nice.., I totally get the scar pain, tho I don't have any personal experience, I have family members that experience that so it's easy for me to understand where she's coming from.., I think Zoro knows that best.., contrary to the manga's depiction, I think Luffy's cheek scar is pretty shallow, but he would definitely understand when it comes to his chest.., ugh, that's prolly one of the worst places.., after the lower abdomen (women in my family have that.., babies and everything yeah) and the face (Zoro, Shanks, Sabo, Brook.., yikes)
Lol that sea king.., eel tuna giraffe XD that actually sounds really tasty.., albeit a little bony.., I love how you did this.., and how Luffy just gets it all.., I especially like the reminder that Nami was alone those two years and any fears she might have she'd have to endure by herself.., of course that's a given but along with the headcanon (which is so great, *stamps* I approve) it's even more eye opening that, crap, those were most likely the hardest 2 years all of the crew members had to go through.., including Robin, who spent a very large majority of her life alone.., Nami's not my favorite Mugiwara but it's things like this that make me think she should stop being the least liked.., she is strong, very much so.., you did this really really great and you don't even need to add the romance and lust for them to have a strong and solid loving relationship.., besides I think Nami might have a crush on Vivi XD yeah I saw that..,
| Imperial Mint chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
This was absolutely gorgeous. It must have been so hard for Nami, but Luffy knows exactly what to say. Thank you so much for this!
| Ventusio chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
It's something else to read about Nami in such a sensitive and difficult moment. She seems so very human. You really gave a lot of depth to her character, thank you. I love nami, unfortunately she is so often portrayed one sided (mostly, annoying but strong).
| Stirling Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
This story is fantastic, and I really enjoyed reading your portrayal of the LuNa relationship. This is so brilliantly written and the wonderful descriptions do very well at showing the extent of Luffy and Nami's bond, and how special their friendship is. I really enjoy stories that show Luffy's serious/mature(?) side and I think you did a very good job of handling this as well. In essence, I find this story to be touching and extremely beautiful, you did an amazing job! Thank you for sharing!
| maria chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
Wow...this was so great...usually fanfic writers focus on Luffy and his pain, that we seem to forget the rest of the nakama have suffered too...love it
| MyLadyDay chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
This was maybe the saddest way someone used the element of water ;A; But I loved it, it's a great story and thank you so much for writing it and participating in our event
| lunarshores chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
I really like how you approached the theme in this story, and the combination of angst and fluff was amazing. Thanks for such a great story
| Aerle chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
I loved the symbolism you used. Thank you for participating