| Reviews for Ray of Light |
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   JD Thorn chapter 9 . 8/12 Hopefully, that means dinner and a movie! |
| JD Thorn chapter 8 . 8/12 I think it was maybe best that they did hold off for a little while. I think they should get to know each other a little little bit better before they jump in the sack. There’s a lot to be said about phone sex too. |
| kneon chapter 18 . 4/13 Great story with a great ending. thank you for sharing |
| kneon chapter 18 . 4/13 great sweet story. thank you for sharing |
| Bevey99 chapter 18 . 10/22/2023 That was so sweet. I loved all the girls. He was a great dad. Thanks for writing and sharing |
| QueenGB chapter 18 . 4/19/2023 Love it! Love it! Love it! |
| QueenGB chapter 14 . 4/19/2023 It’s funny people like Leah only apologize because the situation they imagined didn’t work out. If he had been faithful and loving Bella would have never heard from Leah. But for Bella closure is everything. |
| QueenGB chapter 6 . 4/18/2023 Well done DaddyWard. |
| QueenGB chapter 5 . 4/18/2023 Edward is a great dad but Kate and Garrett got off easy all considering. She didn’t even get restrictions for lying or having a boy home without supervision. |
| cctwilight chapter 18 . 1/30/2023 This was such a great story! Loved it! |
| cctwilight chapter 16 . 1/30/2023 Sweet Emily wanted a mom. Bella will be a good one. |
| cctwilight chapter 9 . 1/13/2023 I night alone with Edward sounds nice! |
| cctwilight chapter 7 . 1/9/2023 Oh now just what will these two get up to? |
| cctwilight chapter 4 . 1/9/2023 Yes, they are going on a date! |
| cctwilight chapter 2 . 1/9/2023 I hope they both open up to each other. |