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| bartlettpear chapter 5 . 8/8/2017
I totally forgot about the couples discount thing, this is horrendously cruel.
(The most unbearable moment for Genos is when he turns to pick something up off a high shelf that he can't exactly reach. His fingertips scrape it and Saitama thinks its completely acceptable to grab the stupid jar of sauce for for him.)
Hang in there Genos :'(
("I wanted to know what you'd like me to taste like." Saitama says it so innocently. The words trigger a feeling in Genos, one mixed between humiliation and excitement as he pushes the cart forwards and mumbles profanities under his breath, hastily bagging his bundle of groceries.)
I have never gone through this type of torture before, I feel so bad for Genos orz
(Saitama replies so smoothly that Genos literally stops in the street for a second.
"There wasn't one."
What the fuck.
Genos can't handle this.)
Holy crap that twist.
(He wonders if he's expected to act cute in some way, if there's some kind of secret in their body language that he doesn't know. It would be an easier task to disable a bomb than going out on a date, he decides.)
Reasonable worries Genos, I like that he voices his questions :)
(He feels scandalized somehow or rather lead on, his hand going to touch the place where Saitama kissed him.)
I think Saitama might be considerate and holding himself back, but also not sure. Great story! If this story is not complete, I hope you find the interest to pick it up again one day. Thank you for writing.
| bartlettpear chapter 4 . 8/8/2017
Wow. Protective Saitama is cool and scary. I like how you had them deal with real people criminals that had weapons versus monsters. Maybe I am reading too much into it or Saitama is slow at realizing how much Genos means to him or maybe Genos is important to him but Saitama doesn't have romantic feelings for him? Poor Genos, considering he gets his hopes up each time, that really is hard :-(
(When Genos wakes up in the morning he's under the covers and a glass of water is on the end table.)
Even if Saitama doesn't have romantic feelings for Genos, it's really nice how he cares and Genos can feel happy and content with him.
| bartlettpear chapter 3 . 8/7/2017
Saitama carefully getting Genos unstuck, carrying him, and telling Genos he doesn't have to apologize was sweet. I am totally down with your Genos who knows how to fix himself and how he has a lot more of his human parts is horrifyingly more painful and graphic Saitama feeding Genos and Genos embarrassed but still eating was cute.
(Genos makes a noise that doesn't even sound human, something between a whine and a strangled moan that makes him quickly cover up his own mouth with his hand as if to smother it, eyes still locked on Saitama. The older man looks at him the entire time he holds holds his thumb to his own mouth, licking the syrup off of it in a almost sensual way that has Genos's face a ruddy red color, a coiling sensation gathering into the pit of his stomach.)
How can this be anything but seduction lol
(Genos is mixed in between wanting to kiss Saitama and running away out of a lack of anything to say about the humiliating noise he just made and of course, the running away side wins inevitably.)
Understandable Genos. Genos is really cute, I'm rooting for you Genos 3
| bartlettpear chapter 2 . 8/7/2017
(He threads their fingers together as they walk out of the store and Genos shoots him a bewildered confused look, hopelessly embarrassed.
When they're far enough away from the store the hero slinks his hand out of the android's and laughs a little. Genos feels as though a trick has been played on him.)
Genos, you poor precious sweetheart :-(
("Well I didn't think we'd get it honestly - but I mean, if the lady at the counter was practically gonna give it to us I was gonna take it. It was a couple's discount. We got like twenty percent off our entire purchase for doing that.")
This honestly sounds like something Saitama would say orz
(But he lets it go, listening to Saitama ramble the rest of the way home with a voice knocking in the back of his head, hoping that the store they go to has another couple's discount, really, really soon.)
That tinge of anticipation feels so bittersweet.
(He tells himself it's normal to think about how nice it was being that close to Saitama.)
It totally is, when you like Saitama that is xD
| bartlettpear chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
(Saitama decided than he likes himself just the way he is. Even if he was too powerful and no hair be damned.
Hopefully it will be more exciting there. He felt the heat around him slowly pull his body and mind towards the abyss and made no resistance.
It is really warm today.)
I liked Saitama's POV and the quiet atmosphere of the story :-)
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/5/2017
Hes a cyborg not an android
| mego96 chapter 5 . 5/6/2017
... where is it? Where's the part where the dream becomes reality? Why aren't they fucking at the end? Other than that it's an excellent story
| vivilovesyou chapter 5 . 11/28/2016
Beautiful! I want more please!
| whitealmond chapter 5 . 2/24/2016
Rofl Saitama is soooo slick- I hope you update soon!
| whitealmond chapter 1 . 2/24/2016
I do have to wonder if the doctor made male genitalia and allowed Genos to retain sexual sensation. Er, I mean, that opening was really hot!
| Raphlez chapter 5 . 1/21/2016
Freaking adorable jeez idk how saitama could handle that I would have jumped genos instantly holy heck
| SilentlyOblivious chapter 5 . 1/16/2016
Is there more? 'Cause I want more. Haha, but this was beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much!
| AnimeniacAnonymous chapter 5 . 1/10/2016
Oh please please PLEASE continue. Genos is too adorably oblivious. I think you got these guys right on the money.
| Yaoifornow chapter 5 . 1/6/2016
You must update this story. I doubt it ends like this.
| supermegie12 chapter 5 . 1/5/2016
I. Freaking. Love. This!