|Reviews for Sailor Ranko: Just add water|
| Ranmazon chapter 14 . 3/25
Ranma should have gone and said "It's a demon it's LYING and I call it on it so you all blame me for pointing it out well screw you, screw all of you, enjoy being men assholes" when they turn on him
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/24
At some point this line should have happened
"several months ago I'd be jumping for joy at being cured but now that I have accepted I'm both to late
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/14/2015
What the F...in your fic Tunnel Vision you have Shampoo & Mousse married by Amazon law when "Mousse" defeated Shampoo
Ok granted the time line was reset so the Termenators never happened (by could have had an Arnold cameo)
but Ryoga & Akari's wedding did happen & it was in the NEW time line this happened so why now
Shampoo & Mousse aren't married?
Makes no sense
| maryjane5000 chapter 14 . 7/14/2015
Akari, Ranko, Nodoka, Kasumi, Neptune, Usagi, Rei are all turned into men (Ranko becomes Ranma(in otherworlds cured)) but when Nodoka sucks Happosai into the box she's a woman again
Then Jupiter shows Usagi he's a princess again, Akari stops Ryoga from attacking Ranma to show he's a she again yet there's no mention of how they turn back
Did the demons enhancement of Jusenkyo break & they are now unlocked but still cursed
Did the demons spell destroy the Jusenkyo curse when he was captured
| maryjane5000 chapter 7 . 7/13/2015
Found a mistake Shampoo married Mousse back in Tunnel Vision Shampoo married Mousse thanks to Ranma using the disguise pen at Ryoga & Akari's wedding & before you say it was erased cause the timeline being fixed, it happened in the fixed timeline
So even if Shampoo still wants Ranma it doesn't make sense for them not to state that she is married to Mousse
| maryjane5000 chapter 6 . 7/13/2015
1st of all I love the references to the Treehouse of Horror 3
& I gotta ask what's the difference between Push & Shove?
| maryjane5000 chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
If your going by the canon then Major mistake as
Furinken didn't find out about the curse at the gymnastics they found out at the Kendo/Cheerleading competition
Cheerleading: Ranma vs Mariko
Kendo: Tatewaki Kuno vs Masked Man(later revealed as Akane)
After Ranma says she loves him he reveals himself to be Akane Ranma freezes then the brilliant panda pours hot & cold water on her revealing the curse
| xThomas2 chapter 14 . 1/2/2015
Lol barney wow
| Clare chapter 15 . 3/13/2013
The whole barney thing aside, I rather enjoyed this fic. Nice job :P
| Clare chapter 14 . 3/13/2013
...Barney. That's so completely random and probably one of the best ways to remove tension from a story ._.
| Chaos chapter 10 . 9/14/2012
Before this line
Ranma started to tremble. He felt true fear. "Please don't let this be permanent. Please don't... Please..."
You should have had Ranma say
"I don't believe it I wanted to be cured for so long and it never happened. I finally accept my girl I accept Ranko and now..."
it would have made a good scene great
| Chaos chapter 8 . 9/14/2012
Your story great but I think it would have been better if after this scene
Nodoka looked over the seven girls. "Now we will begin learning the fine art of the tea ceremony." Kasumi came from the kitchen in a kimono and held a tray of teacups and teakettles. The training had begun.
This scene happened
"Before you get started, allow me to show you something"
"Ok Ranko, go ahead"
Within a couple of minutes Kasumi, her Mother and the Inners were shocked that Ranko and Akane had actually performed the tea ceremony perfectly, seeing the looks on her mothers face she answered her yet to be asked question
"Akane & I both also learned the normal version of the Tea Ceremony when we were taught the Martial Arts Tea Ceremony version by Sentaro's Grandmother the current Grandmaster of the Daimonji School of Martial Arts Tea Ceremony"
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/14/2012
You must like "The Simpsons" reason I know is I caught "The Simpsons" reference
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Awesome and interesting please continue!
| sailor libra chapter 1 . 1/6/2011