Reviews for Sailor Ranko: Just add water |
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![]() ![]() I know this is years late but this is my 3rd or 4th time reading this series & realized you could have made one small change & it would be better That is have Ryoga blame Ranma, Ranma yells it’s Happosai’s fault the demon is turning women into men the demon over hears then changes his plan instead of Ranma just blurting it out to the demon like a idiot Oh & Burgerbecky PLEASE UPDATE YOUR COMIC VERSION |
![]() ![]() It would have been a bit better if you would have had the following after “Ranma you are such a jackass” “I am not the one casting the spell” “You are the one that gave it the idea” Ranma such have gone “really? the words I JUST spoke gave it the to eliminate all women and yet he has been turning women into men for at least 48 hours BEFORE I said it. So please Ukyo enlighten me how in the blue hell did I give it the idea before I ever said it? I really want to know how I am responsible for his plan?” |
![]() ![]() Good tale in my opinion |
![]() ![]() Ranma should have gone and said "It's a demon it's LYING and I call it on it so you all blame me for pointing it out well screw you, screw all of you, enjoy being men assholes" when they turn on him |
![]() ![]() At some point this line should have happened "several months ago I'd be jumping for joy at being cured but now that I have accepted I'm both to late |
![]() ![]() What the F...in your fic Tunnel Vision you have Shampoo & Mousse married by Amazon law when "Mousse" defeated Shampoo Ok granted the time line was reset so the Termenators never happened (by could have had an Arnold cameo) but Ryoga & Akari's wedding did happen & it was in the NEW time line this happened so why now Shampoo & Mousse aren't married? Makes no sense |
![]() ![]() ![]() Akari, Ranko, Nodoka, Kasumi, Neptune, Usagi, Rei are all turned into men (Ranko becomes Ranma(in otherworlds cured)) but when Nodoka sucks Happosai into the box she's a woman again Then Jupiter shows Usagi he's a princess again, Akari stops Ryoga from attacking Ranma to show he's a she again yet there's no mention of how they turn back Did the demons enhancement of Jusenkyo break & they are now unlocked but still cursed or Did the demons spell destroy the Jusenkyo curse when he was captured |
![]() ![]() ![]() Found a mistake Shampoo married Mousse back in Tunnel Vision Shampoo married Mousse thanks to Ranma using the disguise pen at Ryoga & Akari's wedding & before you say it was erased cause the timeline being fixed, it happened in the fixed timeline So even if Shampoo still wants Ranma it doesn't make sense for them not to state that she is married to Mousse |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1st of all I love the references to the Treehouse of Horror 3 & I gotta ask what's the difference between Push & Shove? |
![]() ![]() ![]() If your going by the canon then Major mistake as Furinken didn't find out about the curse at the gymnastics they found out at the Kendo/Cheerleading competition Cheerleading: Ranma vs Mariko Kendo: Tatewaki Kuno vs Masked Man(later revealed as Akane) After Ranma says she loves him he reveals himself to be Akane Ranma freezes then the brilliant panda pours hot & cold water on her revealing the curse |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol barney wow |
![]() ![]() The whole barney thing aside, I rather enjoyed this fic. Nice job :P |
![]() ![]() ...Barney. That's so completely random and probably one of the best ways to remove tension from a story ._. |
![]() ![]() Before this line Ranma started to tremble. He felt true fear. "Please don't let this be permanent. Please don't... Please..." You should have had Ranma say "I don't believe it I wanted to be cured for so long and it never happened. I finally accept my girl I accept Ranko and now..." it would have made a good scene great |
![]() ![]() Your story great but I think it would have been better if after this scene Nodoka looked over the seven girls. "Now we will begin learning the fine art of the tea ceremony." Kasumi came from the kitchen in a kimono and held a tray of teacups and teakettles. The training had begun. This scene happened "Before you get started, allow me to show you something" "Ok Ranko, go ahead" Within a couple of minutes Kasumi, her Mother and the Inners were shocked that Ranko and Akane had actually performed the tea ceremony perfectly, seeing the looks on her mothers face she answered her yet to be asked question "Akane & I both also learned the normal version of the Tea Ceremony when we were taught the Martial Arts Tea Ceremony version by Sentaro's Grandmother the current Grandmaster of the Daimonji School of Martial Arts Tea Ceremony" |