|Reviews for I am Cecily Herondale|
| DreamsArelikeShotguns chapter 2 . 8/17/2014
You would love your beta...
But anyway back to the point. This is cool and unlike most people you used spell check.
Peace out girlscout
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| Jillessa Heronstairs chapter 2 . 8/13/2014
Ahhhh thank you for the dedication!
This is so intriguing, really!
It's so much easier to read now, so thank you for putting the different people talking in new paragraphs!
I love how Lucie and and Cecily converse inside her mind, because it's such an intersting idea!
Anyways, fantastic work! I am waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
| bookowls chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
| rainbowchameleon chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Sounds intriguing. Can't wait to read more!
| Jillessa Heronstairs chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Oh gosh I have to admit, this is so unique! I loved the entire idea of a modern day girl going back in time and being Cecily. Is this story going to go through all the events of CP2, bit from cecily/lucie's point of view?
I have a little advice. When you have a new person talking, make sure you put space between the paragraphs, like when Magnus is speaking to Lucie, or when Lucie is communicating with Cecily through her mind. It looks a little bit squished together right now, and it's a bit confusing.
Also, I was wondering, when in the books is the scene you are describing in the third paragraph?
Otherwise, great job! I'm eager to read more and see what happens!
Sorry for such a long review. :)