Reviews for Unravel Me |
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![]() ![]() Great poem |
![]() ![]() Nice poem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You just keep on ...don't you? I'm thrilled that you do. Jena~ |
![]() ![]() Wonderful twist. Prefect as always. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending really surprised me! Reading along, I was sure that this poem was from Andy's perspective because the speaker expresses feelings of fear and powerlessness that instantly conjured an image of assistant Andy pining for unattainable boss Miranda, who really does have power over her in the workplace. But with one word, you flipped the entire script; it's actually Miranda who feels ensnared and powerless in her (possibly unrequited) feelings for Andy. What a twist, Gun! I love how you write these characters. Brava! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful, good job! |