I love your concepts always wondered what if James was not Harry's Dad but James did not know

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An incomplete but wonderful story

I hope that whatever you do, Harry will be able to come up on top. Perhaps even find an accord with his father and understand that he does care about him. Eventually, I'd like to see Harry give Mycroft his comeuppance. A question...how old is Harry here? Holmes guesstimated around 14. I have concerns that Sirius' attitude would lead to heartbreak for Harry when Sirius finds out that Harry isn't his best friend's son. What I would like to see is Harry coming into himself and becoming a force of nature that Mycroft didn't expect.

An inter3esting twist on the 'different father' theme. :)

The great and terrible truth behind her actions

Awesome chapter. Looking forward to the next one!

An interesting tale. Your Mycroft is rather more sinister than I have seen before, but this version is magical and has power so he is going to be a super manipulative (more than TV canon, which is manipulative. )

I look forward to see where you take this. Thank you for writing and sharing this.

Poor Harry, it appears that he is shafted in both the Wizarding and the reai world.

On one hand a manipulative schemer makes sure that his childhood is bleak, and on the other hand another manipulative schemer is happy to dump him into the "deep end" of national politics guidance. What a quandary for a young man.

Se many mysteries, so few chapters to go, alas!

I am sorry for the bad manners of people who won't write for themselves. Thank you for leaving this up.

Bonjour,
Je pense que je ne lirais jamais la suite... j'éprouve un tel sentiment de dégoût envers Mycroft depuis le début de l'histoire que j'ai envie de vomir, de pleurer de rage, et j'ai en sentiment de violence.
Je ne sais pas comment le dire mais je trouve de loin le comportement des Dursley moins "grave"... au moins ils sont sincères, on sait à quoi s'en tenir.
Je ne comprends pas comment on peut imaginer un tel personnage... je suis révoltée !

Critique à part, tu écris sûrement très bien pour avoir réussi à m'énerver à ce point. J'ai de la chance de ne pas avoir cassé le téléphone (...) Et qu'on ne me dises pas pas que j'aurais pu m'arrêter de lire car ce n'était pas possible, je ne pouvais pas passer à autre chose sans finir.
Félicitations, pour ton récit ( même si je ne t'en remercie pas ! / j'espère pouvoir dormir sans cauchemars)

I am intrigued. Can’t wait to see where you will take this. Which is interesting because I also don’t actually like any of the characters. John, Harry, and Hermione have potential, but Mycroft and Althea are so off-putting in their manipulations. And why doesn’t Sherlock challenge Mycroft for custody of Harry? Even if only for the brotherly concept of “mine not yours”.